Take a very close look at this photo.

cave-creature

Can you see that dark creature? It’s staring back at you. See its eyes?

Don’t look away from it. Stare at the creature for at least five seconds, and you’ll see exactly what it is.

Here, take another look. Remember, look at it for at least five seconds.

cave-creature

Did you stare at it for at least five seconds?

Did it reveal what it was to you?

Did you notice how it moved slightly?

No? Then take a final look. Remember, stare at it for at least five seconds. If you do, you’ll see it move slightly and reveal its secret.

cave-creature

Did it work? No? Then I’m going to have to tell you.

You see, that creature is the creak of the door. That faint sound you hear in the middle of the night wakes you up and makes you freeze, unable to move. That feeling terrifies you even though you’re not sure you heard a noise.

That creature is the creak of the trees as you walk past them. It’s the faint sound of those footsteps behind you. It’s the one ring of the telephone that stops and makes you wonder if anybody is really calling you. The chill passes through your body when somebody walks over your grave. That creature is the whisper you think you heard when you were all alone.

That creature only sleeps on the night of Halloween. That’s the one night you can rest, knowing you’ll be safe…unless…you stared at the photo for more than five seconds.

Did I not mention that the photo is cursed and that nobody should stare at it for more than five seconds or have read this post? Now you’re cursed. You see, that creature is me. I’m right behind you right now! Whatever you do, don’t look behind you. In fact, never ever look behind you ever again. Never! You see, if you do, then…

I am the creature.


Written in response to Sue Vincent’s The Thursday Photo Prompt #writephoto – Over at The Daily Echo.

Photo credits to Sue Vincent.

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97 responses to “Flash Fiction – Creature”

  1. Urspo avatar
  2. TanGental avatar

    you’re horrible. How am I meant to sleep now?

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Very well, I hope, Geoff. But don’t look behind the pillow! Just saying…😱

  3. jan avatar

    Oh no, I’m cursed!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Are you sure, Jan? Have you looked behind you…yet? 😱

  4. Ritu avatar

    Omg! Hugh@ that was creepy!
    I’m cursed now though…..

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      lol, no, only of you read the whole post or stared at that photo for more than 5 seconds. You didn’t, did you, Ritu? Ritu?
      Ritu? OMG, Ritu? 😱

      1. Ritu avatar

        😱😱😱😱😱

  5. Erika Kind avatar

    Thank you for helping me and revealing the secret and that from now on I will never ever sleep again. Well done 👍😄

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Sleep tight, Erika. Did I say ‘Don’t look under the pillow?’

      1. Erika Kind avatar

        Thank God, you didn’t 😂

        1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

          There’s still tomorrow night. And the night after, and the night after, and the night after… 😱

          1. Erika Kind avatar

            See, that is the good part of bein 40+ and having a busy life….. you forget easier 😂

            1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

              But the creature never forgets who it needs to visit; especially on dark creepy nights when victims are on their own. Was that your front door I could hear creaking? 😱

            2. Erika Kind avatar

              Hahaha… you don’t give up… lol! It will be the scariest night ever tonight…. 🙈 😤 😱 😰

  6. Let's CUT the Crap! avatar

    I’ll never turn or look over my shoulder again. What have you done to me? o_O O_o Eeeekkke.
    :-D :-D good one, Hugh.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Good to hear, Tess. Tomorrow, you’re safe; I sleep during Halloween, but then there’s the 364 other days of the year…😱

  7. willowdot21 avatar

    Arrrrrrrrrrgh! A Hugh Monster. OMG I am really scared now.xxxx

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I’m sure you’ll be safe, Willow. Just don’t behind you…Ok? 😱

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        Hellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllp!!!!!

  8. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Just read this in the daylight around a crowd of people. Creepy indeed, but that is surely the eye of a sleeping dragon. I’m safe! I hold up my cross, garlic cloves and silver stake, LOL!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Good for you, Terri, but did you look behind you yet? 😱

  9. Marje @ Kyrosmagica avatar

    Ohh Hugh I thought you were a sweet chap now I’m beginning to think you’re a bit of a devil. :)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      What? After all those lovely short stories I wrote, Marje? 👻

      1. Marje @ Kyrosmagica avatar

        I should have known…. !!!

  10. John W. Howell avatar

    I just hung wolfbane and garlic all over the place. Good one, Hugh. *blink blink* Slowly I turned……

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      And you still think you’re safe, John? 😱 I like garlic with my pasta.

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