April 1 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a swift passage. You can take inspiration from any source. Who is going where and why. What makes it swift? Go where the prompt leads!


A Night To Remember – by Hugh W. Roberts

Like they’d been told when booking their tickets, this would be a swift journey. But for some, the swiftness would become a little longer.

The bright light came from nowhere. It was only the reflection of moonlight that brought it to the attention of some of the passengers.

Its swift passage from its home would only bring death and destruction.

Like a giant sculpture in the middle of the ocean, the iceberg towered above everything. Thirty-nine-year-old *Mr Hugh Roscoe Rood joined just over fifteen hundred others on their swift passage from the Titanic to the next world.

Bon voyage.

***

*Mr Hugh Roscoe Rood was an actual passenger abroad the Titanic.

The RMS Titanic sank in the early morning hours of 15 April 1912 in the North Atlantic Ocean, four days into her maiden voyage from Southampton to New York. 

Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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44 responses to “A Night To Remember #flashfiction”

  1. Retirement Reflections avatar

    I felt the twist as well!
    You are very good at this — even when building in a twist unconsciously!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Donna. I had no intention of any twists in this short piece, so it’s great to hear that some of you are still finding them. That makes me smile.

  2. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    I didn’t realize that there were that many passengers aboard (abroad? :)) the Titanic. Great usage of the prompt, Hugh. Your creative juices keep flowing. Happy week!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Over 2000 passengers on board the Titanic, Liesbet. Yet only enough lifeboats to carry 500. When the ship was built, it was claimed it was unsinkable. I don’t think they ever gave a thought that an iceberg would become the ship’s downfall. This story (and some of the comments) have sparked an idea for my next post over at the Carrot Ranch (due w/c 3rd May).

  3. Aimer Boyz avatar
    Aimer Boyz

    Got me again. I was thinking aliens, or body snatchers… and then I read Titanic! :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Lol, I hadn’t intended this to have a twist, but it seems it does.

  4. Dan Antion avatar

    Very nicely done!

  5.  avatar
    Anonymous

    Brilliant Hugh I didn’t see that coming 💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m not sure who you are, Anonymous, but thank you.

  6. tidalscribe.com avatar

    If only they had mobile phones then – #iceberg on Instagram.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      When time travel becomes available to the general public in 2028, you’ll be able to do just that.

      1. tidalscribe.com avatar

        It would be unlucky to take your first trip on a time machine and end up on the Titanic – unless you were in time to warn them, or has Doctor Who already done that?

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          You’ll only be able to spectate at first, so that stops anyone from altering history. Doctor Who has already been on the Titanic, but it was a liner that sailed in space rather than on the sea. Kylie Minogue had a starring role in the episode.

  7. eob2 avatar

    A night that went down (no pun intended) in history. Nice use of prompt.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. This is the 2nd time I’ve come back to setting a story onboard the Titanic.

      1. eob2 avatar

        You’re welcome, you might have a connection.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          That’s an interesting thought. I was looking for a passenger with the same surname as me to use in the story. There was none, but the one I used stood out as he had the same first name as me.

          1. eob2 avatar

            You might have had a different name.

  8. Cathy avatar

    Much said and imagined in a few words, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Cathy. The word prompts made me think of ships, which led me onto the Titanic. With the 109th anniversary of its sinking coming up soon, it seemed the perfect place to set the story.

      1. Cathy avatar

        You certainly evoked the atmosphere.

  9. Esther Chilton avatar

    I really enjoyed that. You used the prompt really well, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Esther. I always know I’ve done particularly well with a prompt when I get a comment from you. After all, you’ve taught me a great deal in the art of writing short fiction.

      1. Esther Chilton avatar

        You really have grown as a writer, Hugh, and you should feel very proud of yourself.

  10. Darlene avatar

    Excellent use of the prompt.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Darlene. ‘Ships’ came to me as soon as I saw the prompt words.

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