November 12 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes avocado toast. How can this be a story or a prop to a story? Use your senses and imagination. Go where the prompt leads!


Avocado On Toast – by Hugh W. Roberts

I always met Carl at this restaurant. But this foggy Thursday evening was much different.

The waiter looked at me peculiarly when I ordered two portions of avocado on toast.

A sudden burst of cold air crossed the table as he placed two plates of green coloured toast in front of me.

I couldn’t thank him. I couldn’t move, yet my ears picked up the sound of Carl’s voice cutting through the foggy night.

“Good. You’re ready. I’ve been waiting for your signal. I told you I’d come to get you when you ordered avocado on toast for us.”


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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This post is dedicated to my father, Emrys Roberts, who sadly passed away on October 22nd 2020. Rest in peace, Dad.

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43 responses to “Avocado On Toast #flashfiction”

  1. Jules avatar

    Oh… I was just poking around. Interesting how serendipity works. Now I’d really like to send you that little collection of poems. ~Jules

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Jules. That would be wonderful.

  2. Jules avatar

    Enchanting. I lost my mother when I was very young. I had always hoped she would some how look out for me or contact me… but I think like the play ‘Our Town’ – that once where-ever she went, she didn’t look back too much.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      It’s such an interesting subject of whether we still have access to those we love when we depart this world. I’ve always believed that my grandmother (from my mother’s side of the family) has kept an eye on me and guided me through difficult situations I’ve encountered since she passed away. I’ve no idea why I believe it’s happening, but I truly feel that it is.

  3. D. Wallace Peach avatar

    I’m so sorry to hear about the loss of your father, Hugh. Sending you and yours warm hugs. And thanks for the story. <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you so much, Diana. I really appreciate your kind words at this sad time.

  4. Liz H avatar

    Very subtle ghost story–nicely done!

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  6. dgkaye avatar

    A lovely tribute story to your father Hugh. I’m so sorry for your loss. I hope you are holding up okay? Hugs across the windy pond. xx <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. It’s been a month now, Debby. I’m pleased to say that I finally got back into my writing and blogging routine at the beginning of this week.

      1. dgkaye avatar

        I noticed your absence :) x

  7. Will avatar

    Thank you for Avocado on Toast and your other stories, Hugh. Your blog was the first one I read when I joined WordPress a month ago. I am sorry to hear of your father’s passing, but glad to see you have an outlet. As others have said your Flash Fiction piece is more poignant in light of your Dad’s passing. I wish you well and hope that 2021 brings joy.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Will, first of all, thank you for choosing my blog as the first one to read when you joined WordPress. I hope you’re enjoying your blogging journey?

      It was only because of blogging that I started writing short stories and pieces of flash fiction again. This one was the first I wrote after my father’s funeral. I think he would have liked it.

  8. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Your piece gave me the chills, Hugh. Must have been that frosty air. Yet, being able to decide when your time has come is a gift in itself. I’m glad your dad would have liked your twisty stories, especially this one. Again, I offer you my deepest condolences and I hope the funeral brought some closure. Take care, my friend, and keep, living life to its fullest. xox

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      This was the first piece of writing I did after my father’s funeral, Liesbet. I’m pleased to say that I’m already getting back into the writing and blogging worlds.
      Thank you so much for your condolences.

  9. robbiesinspiration avatar

    I am so sorry to hear about your father, Hugh. Losing a parent is so tough, even when they are older and you expect it at some point, the actual event is still very hard. This is a clever piece, I enjoyed it.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. It’s been a tough few weeks, but it’s good to be back to the worlds of blogging and writing.

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