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Hot Dates

Hot Dates

Warning – adult content.

He was the perfect example of everything she’d been looking for. With the body of Adonis and the smile of Casanova, Mary Daniels knew she was in for a good time.

He had sat her down on the bed and allowed her to undo the buttons on the white dress shirt he wore. Something down below had stirred within her as she undid the fifth button and got a glimpse at what lay beneath the white shirt. Not yet, she had told herself, let the excitement build and take in every single second of the anticipation of what was to come.

When she had looked up into his dark eyes, as she undid the last visible button of his shirt, she had imaged that he was communicating with her telepathically. ‘Go on’, said his voice in her head, ‘pull up the remainder of my shirt so you can undo the final few buttons.’

As Mary Daniels pulled up his shirt and undid the last few buttons, the passion inside her had almost exploded. After watching him slowly removing the expensive, gold cufflinks that had held the shirt cuffs in place, she had stood up and gently pushed the shirt off his shoulders. Before her had stood absolute perfection.

Having pushed her back onto the bed, Mary had watched as the hunk undid the belt of his trousers. She had slowly licked her lips as his trousers dropped to the floor revealing a weapon of mass destruction behind a pair of black, Lonsdale boxer shorts. He really must have found her as attractive as she did him if he was going to use it on her.

Several minutes later as he picked up the $500 left on the bedside table of the hotel room, Mary Daniels was dead.

As he dressed, no emotions passed through his mechanical brain. His job was to now get the money back to his creator, change his appearance by shift-shaping, and await the next call to the ‘Hot Dates’ Escort Agency.

Who would he be next, and who would be his next victim?


Written in response to the May Speculative Fiction prompt hosted by D. Wallace Peach at Myths of the Mirror. Click here to join hundreds of other writers who have taken up the challenge.

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72 responses to “Hot Dates”

  1. Writing to Freedom avatar

    This is a creative and kind of creepy story Hugh.:) Kudos for your unique twist on Diana’s prompt!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thank you very much. I couldn’t resist going with the theme that first popped into my head when I saw the prompt that Diana had published. Plus, I enjoy writing stories that take the reader up the wrong path.

  2. C.E.Robinson avatar

    Hugh, always the master of twists. This one is a doozy! My mind was not thinking shape-shifters or murder. Yikes! 📚 Christine

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I’m glad to hear your mind was taken entirely off the trail of the twist, Christine. Thanks so much for reading.

  3. Ethan Dale Eagar avatar

    Hahaha! Wow! Nice twist!

  4. Norah avatar

    One really must be careful meeting up with people from dating agencies and websites.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I agree, Norah, not that use any of those sites of course. 😀

      1. Norah avatar

        I wouldn’t have thought so, Hugh. :)

  5. Debbie Bugezia avatar

    Great twist and I love that he was a shape-shifter! Now I’ll have to watch some StarTrek this weekend. Well after The Avengers tomorrow. 😊

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Happy Sci-fi weekend, Debbie. 👽

  6. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Not a future I’m looking forward to! Sometimes it comes in handy to be married already. :-)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Maybe my glimpse of the future may never happen? I think I’ll be long gone before shape-shifting becomes the norm.

  7. dgkaye avatar

    Loved this! Hugh, you’re really good at the ‘shmexy’ LOL :) xx

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Ooo! I’ve not been told that since…well, I can’t quite remember, Debby. 😂
      xx

      1. dgkaye avatar

        Lol, well I’m telling you now. <3

  8. lindasschaub avatar

    Now there was an unexpected twist!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Glad you never saw the twist coming, Linda.

      1. lindasschaub avatar

        Nope, you caught me off guard Hugh.

  9. JT Twissel avatar

    That date’s just a little too hot!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Yes, in lots of departments. 😀

  10. willowdot21 avatar

    Absolutely brilliant twist at the end. Excellently written had me gripped from the start 💜

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      That’s wonderful, Willow. I’m glad I managed to hook you in and keep you reading.

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        You certainly did 💜

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