Invisible Balloons

You can’t see me, but I’m watching you. You people interest me. Why are some of you unfaithful to the ones you say you love? Why do some of you murder those of the same kind? Why do some of you allow ‘hate’ to rule your minds?

You don’t know it, but each of you has a balloon. Like me, they are invisible to you but surround each of you. When your balloon bursts, you die.

It won’t be long, now, before my balloon bursts and you will all die. This planet, you all so un-love, will be mine.

I have no idea where this piece of flash fiction came from. I didn’t even have to think about the prompt. The first (and only draft) was precise 99-words long. That’s never happened to me before.

Written in response to the 99-word flash fiction challenge with the theme of ‘Balloons‘ over at the Carrot Ranch.

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75 responses to “Invisible Balloons”

  1. Norah avatar

    99 words in one go! Whoa! That’s a mighty effort. Have to hope his (your) bubble doesn’t burst. :)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I know. I even shocked myself when I finished the first draft, checked the number of words, and it was 99, Norah. That’s never happened to me before. Plus, I was happy to leave everything as it was. 😀

      1. Norah avatar

        I can’t think of one thing to argue with.

  2. Balloons « Carrot Ranch Literary Community avatar

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  3. Charli Mills avatar

    A chilling flash with a touch of sinister prophecy. Well done, Hugh!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thank you, Charli. I particularly enjoyed this challenge.

  4. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    A story that makes total sense and was meant to be, Hugh! Now, if only everyone would listen to balloons. :-)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thank you. Yes, I hear them talking to each other, Liesbet 😀And they are starting to get louder. 😱

  5. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Awesome, Hugh, evil balloons! Must be a helium-high!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      lol, yes, whatever inside is even eviler when the balloon is filled with helium, Terri. *cue evil laugh* 😈

  6. dgkaye avatar

    First try, 99 words exactly? You are the master! Word bubble comes to mind. :) <3 Imagine if everyone could read our word thought bubbles? :)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Or even our thoughts, Debby. Yikes, I would have got myself into all sorts of trouble had that happened. 😇
      xx

      1. dgkaye avatar

        Lollllllll, wouldn’t we all! :) xx

  7. ellenbest24 avatar

    Your spooky ninety nine and the sinister whisperings are no surprise to me. It reminded me of Patrick McGoohan’s 1960s masterpiece The Prisoner and Hugh your not that far from Port Merrion.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I know. It’s a place I must visit someday…before it’s too late. 😀

      1. ellenbest24 avatar

        To late? To wear a suit with a black polo neck. 😁😂

        1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

          Before those balloons start popping 😈🎈

  8. Carol avatar

    The master at work… always a twist :)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      The Master? That makes me think of The Master on Dr Who, Carol, but I like him a lot. 😀

      1. Carol avatar

        HaHa…That’s good :)

  9. Aimer Boyz avatar
    Aimer Boyz

    Balloons. 9 people out of 10 think birthday parties. You however, get all sinister and threatening…never change :)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I’m gonna have to surprise you all, one day…

  10. jjspina avatar

    It sounds like a lot of hot air to me, Hugh! You are a talent to be reckoned with! LOL! 🤗

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      lol, thank you, Janice. Those hot air balloons are the ones that really worry me. 🎈

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