July 4, 2023, prompt: Write a story as a message from a feather in 99 words (no more, no less). Think about how the message is shared and from whom to whom. What kind of feather? How can you expand where feathers come from, like boas and down ski jackets? Whatever tickles your muse this week. Go where the prompt leads! See July 4: Story Challenge in 99-words for more details.

Messages From Above – by Hugh W. Roberts

A lone feather quivered in the attic’s cobwebbed corners, bearing a harrowing message from the netherworld.

It spoke of a cursed talisman begrudged by an evil spirit who craved mortal souls.

Its whispers echoed through the air at night, driving those who lived below to hear scratching sounds they were too afraid to complain about.

The more the victim put off grumbling, the more the lone feather transformed into a shadowy figure, hunting its next prey.

It warned all who dared hear its message; once entangled, escape was futile.

And those who contemplated complaining would die upon seeing it.

Read the last part of the story here.


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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12 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Messages From Above”

  1. Nicole Horlings avatar

    Ooh… nice creepy vibe in this story.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you think so. Thanks, Nicole.

  2. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    No escape, so the moral is to not complain… about anything, LOL! Good creepy fun, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Exactly, Terri. Our time can be better spent than complaining.

  3. Erika avatar

    So, there is definitely no escape…

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      None whatsoever. Brings the story (which I published last week) to an end (especially as some were asking for more).

      1. Erika avatar

        I totally got you, Hugh 😄 and you could not have made a better clear ending… you won’t find me complaining at all 😂

  4. Brenda avatar

    Loved it Hugh … Great linking …. they work so well together

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you think so, Brenda. And I think the last line of this piece of the story brings the story to an end?

      1. Brenda avatar

        Yes, I’d say so 😁

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