July 22, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a hometown. It can be your hometown or a fictional one. Who is there? When is it set? What is happening? Go where the prompt leads!


When Death Comes Quickly – by Hugh W. Roberts

Finding herself abandoned by her parents, Annabelle settled down for the night. This was the first time she’d be alone in her hometown, and it was dark, damp and smelly.

Squeezing into a tiny corner, she sobbed. Why had her parents decided now was the time to leave their hometown without her? She was too vulnerable to be left alone.

It was a bright light that woke her before she and her hometown were covered in a minty mouthwash that instantly killed them.

Not even a germ was safe when its hometown was the mouth of a human being.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.


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35 responses to “When Death Comes Quickly #flashfiction”

  1. My Hometown « Carrot Ranch Literary Community avatar

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  2. dgkaye avatar

    Loved it, right down to the last drop a la Hugh Roberts. <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Debby. This one has been hanging around in my archives for a long time. Now seemed the right time to let it lose on you all.

      1. dgkaye avatar

        Yes, it was perfectly preserved :)

  3. Rebecca Glaessner Author avatar

    What a twist Hugh! Loved it. Great take on the prompt.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Rebecca. Glad you enjoyed it. I wrote this piece last year but never published it. ‘Hometown’ seemed the perfect prompt for me to release it.

  4. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Haha! I love these twisty Hugh stories!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad to hear you say so, Liesbet.

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