Flash Fiction – Special Places

In her final moments, she clung to the happy memories this special place held for her—the vibrant parties, the infectious laughter, the shared joy, and the wonderful people she had connected with. Their smiling faces flickered in her mind, a bittersweet reminder of the past.

She remembered the day she’d lost the ring her parents had gifted her on her 21st birthday. Her future husband had found it and, at first, declined the reward her father had offered for its return. She was speechless that he had never proposed, but she’d been given away.

As she lay on the floor, her happy, special place slipping away, the recent memory of losing her tongue, a punishment for the incessant accusations, was excruciating. This place hadn’t been happy or special for all of the time, just most of the time. She needed to find her next happy, special place again.

Soon, a new special place will bring her happiness and peace.


Written for Esther Chilton’s writing prompt – Special Places

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35 responses to “Flash Fiction – Special Places”

  1. Marsha avatar

    Did I read this right, Hugh? She literally lost her tongue, had it cut out, and now she is lying on the floor dying, trying to think happy thoughts? I’m queasy, if I am reading it all right. I’m assuming by this wonderful man who returned her ring, and later became her husband is the surgeon who removed her tongue? A man with whom she had spent mostly happy times until she started making accusations? Wow. No, I didn’t see it coming.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Yes, her tongue was cut out by her husband for the accusations she was making, Marsha. There are no hints of if these accusations are true, but she was never happy in the arranged marriage she was forced into by her parents. There may have been some happy moments, but love did not live there after the marriage.

      1. Marsha avatar

        Yikes! OMG! What a story. I hope there was no truth in it!!!

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          All fiction, but I’m sure it’s also true, Marsha.

          1. Marsha avatar

            Let’s hope not!! Abuse is permanent, but that is irreparable! Great story, though!

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