The first time I got my first short story collection edited, I was a nervous wreck.

I needn’t have been because having a fresh pair of eyes helped take my stories to a new level – a level that would have taken me many years to have reached, if at all.

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Do you fear feedback?

Before publishing my second collection of short stories, I asked several friends to read my stories first and give me feedback. Then, I sent the book off for editing.

Of course, I didn’t take all the advice of my editor or those who read my stories before publication, but I’d often meet them halfway.

The initial editing process provided reassurance about receiving feedback. However, the subsequent editing rounds, along with feedback from beta readers, amplified this confidence. The fear of criticism no longer holds me back. What’s there to be afraid of? There’s nothing to fear. After all, why write if nobody will read it?

How To Treat Poor Feedback

A negative review or feedback may initially shake you, but it must never deter you from pursuing your writing. Constructive criticism, even if negative, has the potential to enhance the quality of your stories and writing, so don’t ignore it.

Of course, feedback comes in various shapes and sizes. Feedback such as ‘great story’ doesn’t hold much weight, making me question the purpose of such comments. I would much rather receive good, honest, constructive feedback than be told that my story was simply great.

Like boiled eggs and soldiers, writing and feedback come hand-in-hand. But where is this all going?

How Story Chat Started

In 2020, writer and blogger Marsha Ingrao asked me to write a story for Story Chat, a new feature she was in the process of creating where anyone can submit a story, anyone can read it, and anyone can give honest feedback about it. I jumped at the chance.

I was honoured to be the first to have a story, The People Under The Stairs, published on Story Chat.

Fast forward to 2024, and Marsha’s blog’s Story Chat feature has achieved remarkable success. With over 20 authors and writers actively participating, a book highlighting the first two years of stories, along with reader feedback, has been published.

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Story Chat – Online Literary Conversations

What’s Inside The Book?

The plethora of 22 stories encompasses a wide array of genres, each captivating in its own right.

What truly captivates me is the unwavering dedication of all the authors who not only poured their hearts into their stories but also embraced the invaluable feedback they received. It’s incredible how the majority of the feedback proved to be beneficial, guiding the authors towards refining their narratives. Ultimately, the decision to undertake a rewrite lay solely in the hands of the author, a testament to their artistic autonomy.

Not only do I have two stories in the Story Chat book, but I also have a few favourites in the book.

Did I Have A Favourite Story From The Book?

All the stories are immensely enjoyable and entertaining, but there’s one that truly captured my heart – ‘Dress for a Princess‘ by Wendy Fletcher. It’s an absolute gem of a story that had me on the edge of my seat, gasping for breath as I reached its spectacular ending. This is precisely what I crave in stories – an unexpected, brilliant twist that leaves me in awe.

Wendy Fletcher’s ability to weave such a captivating tale is a true testament to the power of storytelling. Wendy’s story is a prime example of the magic that unfolds within the world of short story literature, where authors can transport readers to captivating realms filled with intrigue and wonder in so few words.

All of the authors whose stories feature in the Story Chat – Online Literary Conversations book are prime examples of taking readers on entertaining journies that stay with you for a long time. They are also masters of short story writing.

Why not take a chance with Story Chat? Purchase the book or contact Marsha to contribute a story for the feature.

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Contact Marsha here.

Do you enjoy reading or writing short stories? What advice can you give writers thinking of writing short stories? Is short story writing something you’re thinking about doing? Do you have any questions about ‘Story Chat’ or writing short stories? Leave them in the comments section.

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88 responses to “The Power of Feedback: A Writer’s Brief Journey Through Editing and Story Chat”

  1. Y3 Story Chat #10: “9-1-1” by Dan Antion – Marsha Ingrao – Always Write avatar

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  4. dgkaye avatar

    Congrats on being part of this new book Hugh. A very interesting concept in writing, sharing, critiquing together, then collaborating on an anthology. I’ve added to my TBR. :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m honoured to have played a part in creating this anthology, Debby. It’s the first time I accepted a request to be part of an anthology. Marsha has done an amazing job with Story Chat and getting the book to publication. I hope you enjoy the stories. Don’t read my stories at night, though.

      1. dgkaye avatar

        Lol Hugh, I already know that about your stories. :)

  5. robertawrites235681907 avatar

    Hi Hugh, this is a most interesting write up about Marsha’s book, Story Chat. I have it on my pile of reads and will be getting to it soon. Like you, I welcome feedback on my writing and I have my published books and stories edited. My writing has improved in leaps and bounds through these developmental editing processes. I am thankful that I’ve improved sufficiently that I don’t have to restructure my entire book anymore. The comments are lessor in nature with is a tribute to the learning process. Of course, the writer has to be open to learning from the feedback as you say.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      When I think how I used to write 10 years ago before I published my first blog post, I can see a vast difference in how I write now, Robbie. And it’s all down to the feedback, support and encouragement I’ve received. I can’t imagine not getting honest feedback on my blog posts. I’d be lost without that feedback.

      I never get upset or feel down about getting any poor feedback. Often, some the negative feedback doesn’t even go into why the person leaving the feedback though the post or story was poor, so that kind of feedback is not helpful. But anybody putting their work out for others to read must realise that it’s not going to be all chocolate and roses. Negative feedback given in a friendly and professional manner is as important as positive feedback.

      1. robertawrites235681907 avatar

        Hi Hugh, I agree. I have also grown hugely from positive critisism. I try to leave good comments but sometimes I just liked something and there isn’t a lot to say.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          That’s where the ‘like’ button comes in, Robbie. If I have nothing of value to add, I’ll click the ‘like’ button and move on. Nobody minds if you don’t always leave a comment.

  6. Y3 Story Chat #9: “Arfer Understands Everything” by Doug Jacquier – Marsha Ingrao – Always Write avatar

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  7. petespringerauthor avatar
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    As a retired educator, I am a huge proponent of the power of collaboration. Not all feedback is created equal, but developing a sense of trust with like-minded folks is huge. Of all of the things I’ve done in the last few years to develop better writing skills, the most valuable has been to find a supportive writing group who can lift us up but also can be honest enough to tell us where our work is missing the mark.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Being honest is what feedback is all about, Pete. It’s a shame that some of those who leave feedback can not be more honest by simply saying ‘Nice story’ or Great post.’ But I also think it helps being face to face with someone so you can see facial expressions of the person you’re giving feedback to.

      I dislike any feedback that is not honest, especially when it is only given so as not to upset the person it’s being left for. That kind of feedback does not help anyone.

      1. petespringerauthor avatar
        petespringerauthor

        Totally agree. If we want to improve as writers, we need honest feedback. My writing group meets weekly in person. One of our rules is that everyone in the group gets a chance to critique a piece before the author responds. It’s one of the best methods because it encourages the writer to listen carefully to the feedback. Once everyone shares, we move into open discussion where everyone, including the writer, participates.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          That’s a great way to receive feedback. And I’m guessing those in the group say more than simply that they enjoyed reading the story.

    2. Marsha avatar

      As a retired educator, also, I think your comment is right on target. I’d love to have you jump in with “Arfer Understands Everything,” and share your honest thoughts with Doug and the rest of the Story Chatters. Educators are good at giving feedback, right?

  8. Dan Antion avatar

    I enjoy Story Chat very much, Hugh. I have a story coming up later this month. It’s my first time participating. I’m looking forward to it and I’m a little nervous.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Welcome to the Story Chat community, Dan. I look forward to reading your story. And thank you for all the feedback you have left on the stories so far.

      1. Dan Antion avatar

        I wasn’t sure, at first, what was expected, but I enjoy the process. I enjoy reading what others think. I’m going to try something out of my comfort zone.

        1. Marsha avatar

          You have been an awesome commenter, Dan. You have the right mix of encouragement and honest and practical ideas to help the authors. We look forward to reading your story in a couple of weeks. I’m loving your book, The Evil You Choose this evening while my husband plays in a poker tournament.

  9. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    I’ve always thought this was a unique idea to publish a book based on the stories and feedback. I bought one but the formatting was weird. Marsha gifted me a signed paperback! Our blogging communities are really something, congrats on yours in there, too, Hugh, and hope to see more of these in the future!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      The formatting was a problem, with little help from Amazon. I felt so sorry for Marsha as she tried to sort out that problem, Terri. Thankfully, somebody came to the rescue and sorted it out for her. Good to hear Marsha gave you a copy of Story Chat.

      I think Marsha has another book planned, but I know it takes a lot of time to put one together. I hope you’re enjoying the stories within Story Chat. They make for some fantastic reading, and I high recommend ‘Dress For A Princess.’

    2. Marsha avatar

      Hey, Terri. Colleen and I figured out that she could upload the corrected copy herself. I think it was mostly messed up on Kindle Unlimited. Once you got it that way, you were doomed. But she finally got a copy for Kindle that worked. I know we have all learned a lot as we move forward to create something even more amazing for the next time. I’m grateful to Hugh for hosting a tour post for Story Chat: Online Literary Conversations. I wonder what we can call the next one. :)

  10. Janis @ RetirementallyChallenged.com avatar

    Hi Hugh. I wish I was braver about leaving comments on another person’s writing. I am so concerned about hurting feelings. The only Story Chat I felt completely okay critiquing was Gary’s AI piece, but only because he is a good writer and he didn’t write it himself. I did leave a very small suggestion about POV on another writer’s story but the response was such that I knew the author didn’t want to consider it.

    I do love Marsha’s series and always look forward to a new story on it. I appreciated the feedback my story received and I hope to participate again next year.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      But why would you hurt anyone’s feelings, Janis? I don’t see why anyone would get upset with feedback providing it’s been left in a professional and friendly manner. You’re actually helping somebody by leaving constructive feedback. We are all human, so we all make mistakes. And whist an author may not agree with some or all of your feedback, I know that many will be thankful to you for taking the time to not only read their story, but also for leavening thoughtful feedback.

      I don’t think any author takes onboard all feedback, but what feedback they do take will certainly help them take what they have written to a new level. Of course, it’s up to them what they do with feedback, but remember that the majority of feedback (including yours) helps makes a writer and author become even better at what they’re doing.

      I also think that leaving feedback that does not help in any way, including saying things like ‘I enjoyed this, great story’ when the person leaving that type of comment doesn’t mean it, can have the reverse effect of good, honest feedback. Far better to be honest.

      I hope you do participate again next year. I enjoyed your story very much and hope the feedback I left you was helpful.

      1. Janis @ RetirementallyChallenged.com avatar

        You are right, of course, but I still am hesitant to leave honest feedback in some cases. It’s easy to tell someone positive things about their writing (although, input more useful than: “great story!”), but honest critique can be difficult (to give and to hear). Bottom line, Hugh, is that I appreciate honest feedback so I need to get over my discomfort and offer the same to others.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          As I said, providing it’s honest feedback given in a friendly and professional manner, then you don’t have anything to worry about, Janis. Being honest is the best approach.

    2. Marsha avatar

      Thank you for your kind remarks, Janis. Sometimes we do get carried away and passionate about our thoughts and concerns. But the authors in general are like you, they want to improve. We all know that we can improve, but we don’t always know how. I also think we have a profound respect and concern for each other – feelings, and what is happening in our lives. I appreciate each one of our authors and enjoy reading their work. Thanks for being part of Story Chat this year.

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