The Final Breaths Of Summer

August 22, 2023, prompt: Write a story about the arrival of the weather in 99 words (no more, no less). It can mean any kind of weather event, meteorological or mythological. Is the weather personified, random, or calculating? Where does it arrive? Is it typical or epoch-changing? Who is involved? See August 22: Story Challenge in 99 words for more details.

The Final Breaths Of Summer – by Hugh W. Roberts

Amid the flags, my town celebrated love, welcoming the weather’s arrival, which marked the final breaths of summer. Hearts bloomed like the August flowers.

Couples, regardless of gender, held hands, their love as natural as the warm sun that had kissed their cheeks.

But, like people, the weather could be erratic.

A sudden storm darkened the sky, raining on the love. But as resilient as a rainbow after the rain, love persisted.

Together, we weather life’s disruptions, proving that love knows no bounds, no matter the storm. It always shines as brilliantly as the sun emerging from the clouds.


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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35 responses to “The Final Breaths Of Summer”

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    Love can weather many a storm as long as two hand in hand like ying and yang walk it as one. X I loved this.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you for your lovely words on one of my very first blog posts.

  2. D. Avery @shiftnshake avatar

    This really explains the rainbow symbol. Beautifully done.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you think so, D. I must look into why the LGBTQI community adopted the rainbow flag.

  3. Michael B. Fishman avatar

    I loved this line: “their love as natural as the warm sun that had kissed their cheeks.”
    I pray that your words in this story one day become the norm and the way everyone lives life.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I do hope so, one day soon, Michael. It’s heartbreaking to think people are horrible to others simply because they are different.

  4. Brenda avatar

    Lovely Hugh. The rainbow after the rain

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Your words remind me of a song, Brenda – Sunshine After the Rain. Now, I’ll be humming it for the rest of the day.

      1. Brenda avatar

        Hehe. Is that a good or bad thing. But I think you’ve returned the favour and it’s in my head too. Nor a bad thing for my lesson planning/focus

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  6. dgkaye avatar

    A beautiful story Hugh :)

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