September 19, 2022, prompt: Write a story about mud on the tires in 99 words (no more, no less). The tires can be from any conveyance or serve as an analogy. How did they get muddy, and why? What impact does mud on the tires have on the story (plot) or characters (motivation)? Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.


An Annoying Speck – by Hugh W. Roberts

It was the tiniest speck of mud on the tyre, but it annoyed him. He couldn’t leave it there on such a special occasion.

“MARSHALL! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” bellowed a voice.

“But sir, there’s–“

“I DON’T CARE. BACK TO YOUR POSITION, NOW!”

“YES, SIR!”

A few seconds before setting off, Marshall retook his chance and removed the mud while his leader turned his back.

Then, on the sound of his boss’s bellowing voice giving orders, Midshipman Marshall joined the other 97 royal navy sailors in towing the carriage containing the Queen’s coffin as the sound of bagpipes played.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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40 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – An Annoying Speck”

  1. Will avatar

    Well done Hugh! Very timely. Though if you don’t mind, a Royal Navy Soldier is actually a Royal Navy sailor. And the navy is always capitalized if named. William J. Miller, Jr., MSgt(Ret.) UASF

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Will. And thanks for the advice. I researched ranks in the Navy, and it seems I didn’t get all right.

  2. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Great story of determination and perfect timing, Hugh!

  3. Brenda avatar

    Great story Hugh.

  4. Erika avatar

    What a wonderful take on this prompt, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar
  5. JT Twissel avatar

    That’s what I call devotion to duty!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I agree. If only everyone in society was the same.

  6. Janis @ RetirementallyChallenged.com avatar

    Although I didn’t watch the somber procession, judging from the pictures I’ve seen, I imagine all mud was removed from the tires (or, tyres) beforehand. Good job, Marshell. :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Everything was perfect, Janis. I’m always amazed at how well the armed forces look on occasions like this. I only wish their training on how to look after things correctly was passed down to all in society.

  7. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

    Oh, this was stunning Hugh! 💙

      1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

        You’re welcome. I thought the Queen’s funeral was emotional for everyone.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          I agree, Colleen. It was an emotional but spectacular day.

          1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

            It will be interesting to see how things fall into place for King Charles.

  8. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    This is really good, Hugh! And timely. When we left our previous camping spot, there was more than one speck of mud on our tires as it had rained the night before and our cow pasture had a lot of dirt. This, in turn, made our tires not grip the road very well. Luckily, all was fine. We didn’t even need to use our 4WD. But, our clean car is not so clean anymore. :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Liesbet.

      Sorry to hear about the muddy tyres. At this time of the year, I find vehicles get much dirtier because of all the mud and spray from the roads and rain. But, so far, we have had a nice start to the autumn, with it being warm by day and chilly at night. Perfect for me.

  9. Cathy avatar

    Nice one, Hugh.

  10. Sadje avatar

    It was a very important occasion

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Yes, it was. Thank you.

      1. Sadje avatar

        You’re most welcome

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