January 14, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about dressing up. It can be a child or another character. Be playful or go where the prompt leads!


Mirror Of Hope – by Hugh W. Roberts

Despite the bruises, Andrew admired himself in the mirror. A princess looked back at him.

“Don’t forget your shoes.”

The red high heeled shoes, although too big, complemented his mother’s burgundy dress he had on.

“You’re pretty,” remarked the princess.

The faint noise of his father’s car’s unexpected arrival caused panic in Andrew and the princess.

“Hide behind me,” yelled the princess, “before he beats you again.”

Crouching behind the mirror, he tried making himself invisible.

As the smell of alcohol and the unbuckling of his father’s belt reached him, tears made their escape down the young boy’s face.

Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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46 responses to “Mirror Of Hope #flashfiction”

  1. Marsha avatar

    Sad story, Hugh. Too real!!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Sadly yes, Marsha. Even in the world of today, this kind of thing still happens.

      1. Marsha avatar

        Some people are wicked, Hugh, and I guess that is not going to change on a wholesale scale. Individuals may change. Even acceptance may change, violence remains. I wish it was different.

  2. Norah avatar

    Oh dear, that’s such a sad story, Hugh. The boy doesn’t deserve a father like that. No one does.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I agree, Norah. So sad that it still happens in today’s world.

      1. Norah avatar

        It does, Hugh. I wonder how many generations it will take for that to change.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          I think we’re slowly getting to when it will happen, Norah. But still, a long way to go.

          1. Norah avatar

            I agree, Hugh.

  3. Cecilywritings avatar

    How a short story brought tears to my eyes and a lump in my throat. Thank you Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad it did because that tells me that my writing evoked emotion when you read it. That’s lovely feedback, thank you.

      1. Cecilywritings avatar

        It did Hugh! And I practiced a piece relating to the next flash fiction! Although I didn’t share, it was fun.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          I’m so pleased you had a go at writing some flash fiction. We’d be delighted for you to join us over at the Carrot Ranch. You’ll find me there most weeks.

          1. Cecilywritings avatar

            Thank you Hugh! Keep safe.

  4. D. Wallace Peach avatar

    Oh, how stark and tragic, Hugh. This broke my heart.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Diana. I’m glad it broke your heart because that tells me that my writing produced emotion with the reader.

      1. D. Wallace Peach avatar

        Full of feeling, Hugh. It doesn’t take a lot of words, just the right ones. :-)

  5. Liz H avatar

    Poignant telling of how we can become our own best protectors, our true selves. ❤

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