July 15, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the word meltdown. You can use it to describe an event or emotional reaction. You can create a new meaning or explore the word origin. You can Go where the prompt leads!


Nightmare In Spring – by Hugh W. Roberts

For the last four weeks, George was in meltdown.

Not only had somebody given him two new black eyes, but a stranger had swapped his favourite yellow scarf for an orange one. George hated the colour orange; it didn’t suit him.

Last week, Judy, who he thought was his best friend, had given him a floppy, wide-brimmed summer hat. What on earth was she thinking? What next? Sunglasses?

Now, this week, he was in total meltdown and having a nightmare time of it all. The beginning of spring was not the best time of the year for a snowman.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.


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50 responses to “Nightmare In Spring #flashfiction”

  1. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    This was just good ole’ LOL funny, Hugh! You are the master of the twist although my eye wandered to the end! What a great flash fiction, with a fab first hook, making me picture a fussy man! You must add this to your next book!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      You checked the ending out first, Terri? Tut, tut. Then again, I recently wrote a post over on my column at the Carrot Ranch about reading endings first. It’s not such a bad thing.
      Glad you liked it. It came to me instantly when I saw the prompt.

      1. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

        Hehe, I didn’t mean to look, but it was all on one page 🤪 It was great, Hugh, slightly edgy but a fun wholesome ending 🤣🤣

  2. JT Twissel avatar

    I never know where your mind is going!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      No do I. It often surprises me and catches me out.

  3. Erika avatar

    Spring… the worst-case scenario!!!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      For snowmen and hayfever sufferers, yes.

      1. Erika avatar

        Oh, right! I forgot those although I am partly joining in… hehe.

  4. janiejunebug avatar
    janiejunebug

    Well done!

    Love,
    Janie

  5. Sadje avatar

    Aww, poor snowman.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Don’t worry, he’ll be back.

  6. Elizabeth avatar

    Love and love it! You made me laugh now. I missed your short stories. Poor snowman!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Elizabeth. Glad it made you laugh. I’m sure George will be back in the winter.

  7. Becky Ross Michael avatar

    I didn’t see that coming, Hugh! Good one!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s exactly what I like to hear about my endings; thanks so much, Becky.

  8. Darlene avatar

    A brilliant take on the prompt! You caught us off guard.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. I love doing that.

      1. Darlene avatar

        You are good at it!!

  9. willowdot21 avatar

    Splendid Hugh 💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar
  10. Norah avatar

    That’s so funny, Hugh. Well done. I laughed at the surprise ending.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad it made you laugh, but even more that you didn’t see that ending coming, Norah. Writing this piece of flash during a mini-heatwave helped cool me down.

      1. Norah avatar

        Pleased to hear it. Mind over matter. Stay safe over there in your new ‘normal’. :)

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