April 15, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that seeds generosity. Who is generous and why? Think of generosity as planting a future outcome. Go where the prompt leads!


Pilgrims – by Hugh W. Roberts

Making footprints in the dusty soil of the piece of land the Mayflower had brought her to, Margery’s ears picked up the sounds of the waves crashing against her ship.

She signalled to her crew to begin unloading the cargo and help bring this land alive.

As the pilgrims left the ship two by two, they each, in turn, thanked Margery for the kindness she’d shown them by setting them free again.

As the Mayflower took off into the sky, the pilgrims named the new world New Plymouth and set about thanking their god, Generosity, for bringing them here.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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35 responses to “Pilgrims #flashfiction”

  1. Marsha avatar

    Terri’s slowness has nothing on me. I didn’t connect the story with the picture until she said how slow she was. I hadn’t even looked at the picture, but scrolled on by! Now I’m being too honest. That’s why I have to read things two or more times! Only you would connect a picture of a May flower with a ship! Now that’s creative thinking! :) Good going, Hugh. I’m posting a link to this story in my last BrightSquare to drum up some more creative Story Chat authors. https://tchistorygal.net/2021/04/30/bright-square-30/

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’ll be honest and say that the 99-word flash fiction challenge is more about the words than the picture, Marsha. However, they do have a connection, but I tend to focus more on the word prompt set by Charli rather than the picture she includes in her challenge.
      It’s amazing what often comes to mind when I read her prompt words and then look at the picture.
      My fingers are crossed that you will gate more takers for the Story Chat feature. It’s been a fun experience.

      1. Marsha avatar

        I do too. I’ve asked several people and some are interested, but after having months in advance, it’s weird to have only one ready to go. We will see. Any suggestions?

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          You could always write a guest post which I’d happily publish on my blog.

          1. Marsha avatar

            I’d love to. Let me work on it today and tomorrow. I’ll try to get it by Monday. Thank you so much! :)

  2. #BrightSquare 30: Bright Destination – Seven Sacred Pools – Marsha Ingrao – Always Write avatar

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