Sacha Black challenges us to write something with ‘The Big Birthday’ theme using just 52 words (no more, no less).

52 Weeks: 52 Words Writespiration 2017

Birthday – by Hugh W. Roberts

“Happy 100th Birthday, George. There’s no point hiding. I know you’re in here. Two cards for you. One’s from the Queen; not that she or anyone else knows who you are.”

Closing the door to the cellar, Muriel wondered how long it took for the smell of a decomposing body to disappear.

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45 responses to “Birthday #writespiration #flashfiction”

  1. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Sad story, funny video! I watched it twice.LOL! Happy birthday to Sacha!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I’m sure she’ll enjoy it, Terri. I don’t think the Queen will mind me sharing her birthday video with Sacha. After all, she’s Queen of the Bloggers Bash.

  2. Olga avatar

    Wow, Hugh. Another one on the dark side of life. Steven King is watching. Ha ha! I’m glad that you ended on a happy note with the wonderful doggy video. <3

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I hope he is, Olga 😀

      The Corgis seem to be a big hit. I’m sure Sacha will enjoy their voices.

  3. Donna avatar
    Donna

    Another brilliant flash piece, Hugh.
    I LOVED the video as well!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thanks, Donna. Those corgis seem more popular than the flash, but I’m glad everyone is enjoying watching them.

  4. Debbie H avatar

    This was great Hugh! I’ve joined in for the first time with a true story. Hopefully that’s allowed :)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I’m sure it is Deb. Thanks for joining in with the challenge. It’s tough to do with only 52 words being allowed, but I hope you have fun with it.

  5. LucciaGray avatar

    😂 Only the Queen knows who he is! Love it😂

  6. Judy E Martin avatar

    Trust you to add such a gruesome twist at the end of the story, Hugh! I enjoyed it though!!
    What a great video, those dog are so well trained! :-)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I’m glad you enjoyed it, Judy. Sacha brings out the dark side of my writing. 😈

      1. Judy E Martin avatar

        I think she does that to a lot of us!! 🤣🤣🤣

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Isn’t it great, Robert? I’ve used it a few times when wishing friends a Happy Birthday.

      1. Robert Matthew Goldstein avatar

        I’ve seen some of the best pet videos since joining Facebook and Twitter. My Birthday…11/10…(hint)

  7. D. Wallace Peach avatar

    Great flash piece, Hugh. You always come up with something original :-) The Corgi song made me laugh out loud. I was wondering when the little one on the right was going to get into the act. Adorable.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Isn’t it, Diana? I do wonder how long it took to put together. Must have taken ages.
      Thanks for the thumbs up on the flash fiction. Sacha seems to always bring out the best in my writing. But, don’t her that, as she’ll want paying. 😀

  8. Liesbet avatar

    This had me think about my grandma, who I hoped would turn 100 for real one day. Unfortunately, she passed away last week at 96. We recently pet sat a hound and he would “sing” (howl) happy birthday with us. It was very funny!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I’m sorry about your loss, Liesbet.
      I’m always amazed by what dogs pick up and sing to. Toby, my dog, does howl, but only while he’s sleeping. It can be quite disturbing in the middle of the night.

  9. Teagan Geneviene avatar

    Marvelous, Hugh. Have a thriving Thursday! Mega hugs.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      You too, Teagan. Every Thursday is thriving for me. 😀
      Hugs to you.

  10. Kat avatar

    Poor George! :) What a cute video! Those dogs are very well trained- especially the little guy at the end who just sits there waiting for his turn to sing.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I just wonder how long it took to put together. I’ve used it a few times to wish various people a Happy Birthday.

      1. Kat avatar

        It took a lot of patience- that’s for sure!

  11. vanbytheriver avatar

    Birthday decomp….only from you, Hugh. Short and sweet ???

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Ah, I should have mentioned the birthday cake Muriel had baked, Van. 🎂

  12. Jane Dougherty avatar

    That, Hugh, takes the biscuit!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      The whole tin, I hope, Jane. Thanks. 😀

  13. Sue Dreamwalker avatar

    Groan……….. lol.. :-) haha… too many cellar stories in the news for real lately Hugh..

    Hope you have a great day, and a clever piece of writing.. :-)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thanks, Sue. The sun is shining and I smell spring in the air. 🌷

      1. Sue Dreamwalker avatar

        Yes we have been in the home garden today.. Lawns were cut.. They were getting very long..

  14. Ritu avatar

    Oh poor George! But such a cute video!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Isn’t it? I wonder how long it took to put together?

      1. Ritu avatar

        I love things like that!!!

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