“As you’re an author and writer, I thought this would be the perfect new home for you, Mr Roberts.”

“Oh, I already love it. How old is it? Of course, I’ll need to see the inside, but I like what I already see.”

“It’s over 100 years old. The seller has instructed me to accept any offers just below the asking price. If you make an offer today, I’ll take it off the market.”

“Perfect. Living here will give me so much inspiration and new ideas for my next novel.”

***

Twenty-four hours later.

“Sign here, Mr Roberts. All being well, you’ll be in tomorrow. The current resident has already left. She was delighted when I told her you were the buyer.”

“Wonderful. I can’t wait to use that huge, dark study in the attic. I wonder how long before I have my first visitors?”

***

It was only a short time before I had my first visitors.

A family of four – the two children under six couldn’t see or hear me as I watched them unpack boxes.

The ‘Hauntings’ Estate agents had come up trumps in finding me my next place to haunt.

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Moving In

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52 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Moving In”

  1. Norah avatar

    Ooooh! The ghostly Mr Roberts!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Who is always looking for a nice house to haunt…

      1. Norah avatar

        And why not?

  2. wrookieschu avatar

    Ooh spooky! I had goosebumps there!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s good to hear that my writing did that, Wayne.

  3. Eugi avatar

    Excellent storytelling, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar
      1. Eugi avatar

        My pleasure, Hugh.

  4. willowdot21 avatar

    Great story Hugh love it 💜💜

  5. Robert J Jr. avatar
  6. Mac's Opinion avatar

    So, the real estate agent. A head haunter? LOL! get it, ‘head – hunter/haunter’?
    I’ll show myself out, sorry.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Yes, and I’m (The Mr Roberts in the story) a ghost writer.

  7. Brenda avatar

    Brilliant Hugh. Lovely story.

  8. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

    Ohhh I love this, Hugh! What a great story!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Colleen. I’m glad you enjoyed this piece of fun.

  9. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    What a great story, Hugh, from a ghosts point of view. It really does make you wonder about the alternate planes of existence! Happy weekend!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Doesn’t it, Terri? It’s like alternative universes. There could another you and me out there somewhere.
      Happy weekend.

  10. noelleg44 avatar

    Fun, fun – and a lovely place to ghost!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I agree. That house looks the perfect place to haunt.

  11. Cathy avatar

    I wasn’t expecting that, Hugh. Great ending.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Cathy. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

  12. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    That’s a great place to live for a ghost. This past week, we rented an Airbnb with friends in Quito (the capital of Ecuador) for two nights. It was an entire house, a former hotel, that was 180 years old and homed a former president of the country in the 1930s. The wooden floors creaked, old beams were exposed, and the layout was very funky. I wondered if there were ghosts, but didn’t hear or meet any…

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’ve heard it said that you got to allow ghosts come to you rather than go looking for them, Liesbet. And some won’t disturb you or give any indication they are present. But that place you stayed sounds an amazing place for them to be. The stories it could tell would be amazing to hear.

  13. Darlene avatar

    A good one! Here’s one I wrote for Dan’s Doors challenge if you have time. Similar theme.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks. I’ve saved the link and will have a read later.

  14. Anonymous Me avatar

    I really liked this, great piece of writing.

      1. Anonymous Me avatar

        You’re welcome

  15. Paul Ariss avatar
    Paul Ariss

    Excellent Mr Roberts. And a little unnerving, as I’m in the market for a new house myself your story may play on my mind!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good luck with the house hunting, Paul. I’ve heard that if a house always gets very dusty, it means no ghosts. So look for signs of dust.

      1. Paul Ariss avatar
        Paul Ariss

        Good tip Hugh. I’ll put it to my estate agent and wait for his feedback…

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