This week’s flash fiction has an adult theme.


If I’d not taken five minutes, my eleven-year-old son Billy would now be dead.

It could have been so different if I had not decided to do what I promised myself for the last five years. Just five minutes, that’s all it took.

The world of technology had taken over my life. Like most of humanity, I had my head buried in a screen. Morning, noon and night, I couldn’t resist it.

I was missing out if I wasn’t checking my social media accounts or email every five minutes. I was missing out on a new world! A new world that just five minutes could change.

The distant sound of crying coming from Billy’s bedroom forced me to bring my head up from the screen of my iPad. Why was he awake and sobbing at this ungodly hour?

When the familiar sound of a ‘ping’ came from my iPad, I could feel myself being pulled into the online world again. I’d made the mistake of looking down and seeing the notification on the screen telling me that Rachel was online.

Aroused by the thought of Rachel, my finger hovered over the Skype button, where I could instantly connect with her, while my ears picked up the sobbing coming from Billy’s room.

What should I do? Check on Billy, or find out if Rachel wore that sexy nurses’ uniform.

Thank goodness I chose to take those five minutes wisely.

If I hadn’t used them to check in on Billy, I’d never have discovered he’d been contemplating suicide. Not only had the death of his mother, five years earlier, taken him to the edge of a cliff, but my new online world and the neglect it had forced upon him had also taken him there.

The self-harm images he’d been looking at online were worlds apart from those I’d watched when Rachel was online. Ready to blackmail me, she’d had the camera ready to record me that night.

Not only had those five minutes saved my son’s life, but they’d also saved mine.

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Five minutes.

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31 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Five Minutes”

  1. Forestwood avatar

    Salient message for parents today. Adolescents struggle more deeply n an emotional sense then their parents did. They need parents to be present n their lives come what may, just as much as parents need to observe. Well done, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you.

      When I was younger, bullying only ever really happened in school. Now it happens all over social media and victims suffer in silence. The world of today is so much busier, and what I call family time has been squeezed in many cases to being almost nonexistent. Technology has certainly changed our lives and in some cases made it easier and perhaps more entertaining, but it also brings its dangers to all of us.

      1. Forestwood avatar

        Yes life with technology is more entertaining and I agree that family time has been eroded. Family nights once around the radio or TV set are now spend isolated with each person engrossed in a different website looking at the phones. Ironic given that the phone was a communication tool.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Yes, it’s odd to think that a device that was meant for communication, is killing the art of conversation.

          1. Forestwood avatar

            Yes killing the art of conversation so dramatically and thoroughly.

  2. Luciana Cavallaro avatar
    Luciana Cavallaro

    What a twist. Yep, time to disconnect and live in the real world. Nice message, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Luciana. I think most of the human race could learn a lesson by spending more time in the outside world (me included).

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