This week’s flash fiction has an adult theme.


If I’d not taken five minutes, my eleven-year-old son Billy would now be dead.

It could have been so different if I had not decided to do what I promised myself for the last five years. Just five minutes, that’s all it took.

The world of technology had taken over my life. Like most of humanity, I had my head buried in a screen. Morning, noon and night, I couldn’t resist it.

I was missing out if I wasn’t checking my social media accounts or email every five minutes. I was missing out on a new world! A new world that just five minutes could change.

The distant sound of crying coming from Billy’s bedroom forced me to bring my head up from the screen of my iPad. Why was he awake and sobbing at this ungodly hour?

When the familiar sound of a ‘ping’ came from my iPad, I could feel myself being pulled into the online world again. I’d made the mistake of looking down and seeing the notification on the screen telling me that Rachel was online.

Aroused by the thought of Rachel, my finger hovered over the Skype button, where I could instantly connect with her, while my ears picked up the sobbing coming from Billy’s room.

What should I do? Check on Billy, or find out if Rachel wore that sexy nurses’ uniform.

Thank goodness I chose to take those five minutes wisely.

If I hadn’t used them to check in on Billy, I’d never have discovered he’d been contemplating suicide. Not only had the death of his mother, five years earlier, taken him to the edge of a cliff, but my new online world and the neglect it had forced upon him had also taken him there.

The self-harm images he’d been looking at online were worlds apart from those I’d watched when Rachel was online. Ready to blackmail me, she’d had the camera ready to record me that night.

Not only had those five minutes saved my son’s life, but they’d also saved mine.

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Five minutes.

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31 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Five Minutes”

  1. Forestwood avatar

    Salient message for parents today. Adolescents struggle more deeply n an emotional sense then their parents did. They need parents to be present n their lives come what may, just as much as parents need to observe. Well done, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you.

      When I was younger, bullying only ever really happened in school. Now it happens all over social media and victims suffer in silence. The world of today is so much busier, and what I call family time has been squeezed in many cases to being almost nonexistent. Technology has certainly changed our lives and in some cases made it easier and perhaps more entertaining, but it also brings its dangers to all of us.

      1. Forestwood avatar

        Yes life with technology is more entertaining and I agree that family time has been eroded. Family nights once around the radio or TV set are now spend isolated with each person engrossed in a different website looking at the phones. Ironic given that the phone was a communication tool.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Yes, it’s odd to think that a device that was meant for communication, is killing the art of conversation.

          1. Forestwood avatar

            Yes killing the art of conversation so dramatically and thoroughly.

  2. Luciana Cavallaro avatar
    Luciana Cavallaro

    What a twist. Yep, time to disconnect and live in the real world. Nice message, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Luciana. I think most of the human race could learn a lesson by spending more time in the outside world (me included).

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  4. wrookieschu avatar

    You had me gripped Hugh. Very relevant today.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good to hear my short story had you gripped. Thanks, Wayne.

      1. wrookieschu avatar
  5. Norah avatar

    That’s a powerful story of two possible terrible outcomes being averted by a good choice. Well done.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Norah. Glad you enjoyed it.

  6. Becky Ross Michael avatar

    Gripping and very thought provoking, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Becky. Glad you enjoyed it.

  7. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Great story, Hugh. One that might have happened in real life somewhere, unfortunately. We all need to spend less time in the virtual world and more time in the real world. I think for a lot of people, social media is an addiction and I won’t be surprised a new disease will be invented soon that has to to do with too much internet time!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I know it’s already happened, Liesbet. Unfortunately, the scammers are there waiting for us to drop our guard. I always shake my head when I visit a bloggers ‘about’ page, and they give their full name, email address and date of birth.

      But I agree that we all need to spend less time in the virtual world. I’m grateful that I grew up in a world before technology and social media existed. Like any addiction, online addiction is something that can ruin the lives of people.

  8. Brenda avatar

    Scary story Hugh with two clear messages (at least). How we can miss the signs that someone is contemplating suicide. Its so sad when a young person feels that’s a legitimate answer for them.
    Also, the risk not just of losing ourselves on line but how some people we see as friends can be predatory and manipulate and take advantage of people. Rachel and her plans of blackmail – I’ve seen things like that happen to others. The online community can be a very dangerous place sometimes … the scammers are there too

    Have a great weekend Hugh. I’m not on holiday this weekend 😒

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’ve been hearing a lot about men and suicide recently, Brenda. Generally, men won’t talk about their feelings. I was shocked and saddened when I heard that the job where most men commit suicide is in construction. It’s also one of biggest killers amongst young men under the age of 24.

      The online world has opened a can of worms. Unfortunately, nobody is safe when on there. I’ve had my fair share of trolls visit me here and had to block them.

      But the scammers are worse, especially when they take money from those who can least afford to lose money. But then there are those of us who give away so much information online for scammers to scoop up. We have to be very careful what information we give out. I saw that one of the new bloggers you recently introduced on your blog not only gave his full name and email address on his about page, but also his date of birth. That’s almost like giving a complete strange the keys to his house.

      You too have a lovely weekend.

  9. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

    Such a powerful message, Hugh! I fear for my grandchildren and great granddaughter! What a world they’ve inherited.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I thank myself so lucky that I was a child before the days of technology, Colleen. Sci-fi stories I’ve read where people have to pay to be able to talk face to face in person socially is something I fear may come true in the future.

      1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

        Good change, Hugh! It’s a scary thought!

  10. willowdot21 avatar

    A very sad story Hugh and sadly it’s rather a common one. Thank goodness the father made the right decision…. I hope he learned his lesson!
    💜💜💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m sure he did, Willow. Well, I like to think so.

      We spend far too much time on our devices thinking we’re missing out on something, where as the real problem is that we’re missing out on the real life right in front of our eyes.

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        Yes Hugh you are so right , it just so relaxing to leave the phone at home and just go out ….. Live in the real world 😄

  11. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Wow, Hugh, incredibly compelling. My eyes stung with tears after I read this. As much as we enjoy our online friends, face to face human contact is far better. That means I’ll have to come visit you. 😁Well done! Enjoy your weekend!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I agree, Terri. As a race, we need to get out and about and meet people in person and talk face to face. But the days of social media have cut away much of that for many. Sometimes, I get annoyed with myself that I’ve spent most of the day online or looking at my phone. Then I think back to those days before technology and think how much longer and slower those days were.
      Happy weekend. It’s a three day weekend here in the UK, and for once, the sun is shinning and it’s sitting out in the garden temperatures without getting frizzled (low – mid 70s).

      1. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

        Yes! And isn’t every weekend a three day weekend when you’re retired? 🤣

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Whenever any of the family say ‘weekend’ to me, I say, ‘weekend? What’s a weekend?’

  12. Cathy avatar

    Food for thought, Hugh and very relevant.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Absolutely in the world of today. Thanks, Cathy.

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