October 24, 2022, prompt: Write a story about bones in 99 words (no more, no less). It can be any genre or tone. Is it spooky, irreverent, or poignant? Go where the prompt leads!


The Ghosts Bones – by Hugh W. Roberts

Death ruled in Aunt Marjorie’s apartment.

When I returned, she wasn’t there; only her bones remained.

The floorboards still creaked, and Mrs Sinclair was still next door.

“When is your Aunt Marjorie due back?” she’d asked.

Shrugging my shoulders, I wish Mrs Sinclair had minded her own business, but I had invited her in.

The whiteness of the human bones wasn’t as bright as the white light that appeared when Aunt Marjorie killed me in her apartment or when I killed Mrs Sinclair for murdering my aunt.

Now we roam the earth as murderous ghosts. Yes, ghosts are murderers.


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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39 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – The Ghost Bones”

  1. Norah avatar

    Oooh. Scary bones.

  2. sweeterthannothing avatar

    At least they still have each other? 😅

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That is very true unless life as a ghost is a lonely existence?

      1. sweeterthannothing avatar

        I hope not, I plan on becoming a ghost myself one day and I want to have plenty of ghost friends to haunt with.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Please let me know if that is what happens. It’s fantastic that you want to become a ghost.

          1. sweeterthannothing avatar

            I’ll put you on my list of people to haunt.

  3. Linda Schaub avatar

    You pack a punch in a mere 99 words and always a macabre twist as well Hugh. Very spooky for the season.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Linda. I’m glad you enjoyed my piece of flash fiction.

      1. Linda Schaub avatar

        I did – you keep us on our toes ’til the end Hugh!

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  5. JT Twissel avatar

    Oh no, I guess I’ll have to put out a lot of garlic Halloween night. Do you think it will help?

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That is only if there are vampire ghosts.

  6. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Perfect for Halloween, nicely done Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Terri. Happy Halloween.

      1. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

        Things will be mysterious for Sunday Stills ;)

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Looking forward to it, Terri.

  7. Brenda avatar

    And I just bought one of your ebooks from Amazon :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy it and will leave a review. Happy reading, Brenda.

      1. Brenda avatar

        I’m also thinking the hard copy may make a good Christmas gift, so im looking forward to reading

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Books also make great stocking fillers, Brenda.

          1. Brenda avatar

            They do. Unfortunately we don’t do stockings in my home … but as I said, perfect as part of a gift 🎁 😌

  8. Brenda avatar

    Loved it Hugh. I had to read the ending a few times. You really caught me off guard. Brilliant story

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Brenda. Glad this piece of flash all made sense. I always find rereading stories can bring new life to them. It’s a bit like rewatching a movie you’ve enjoyed.

  9. Janis @ RetirementallyChallenged.com avatar
    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Happy Halloween, Janis.

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        Thank you Hugh and you too 💜💜

  10. Erika avatar

    Once a murderer, always a murderer…

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Exactly, even wherever we end up on our next journey, Erika.

      1. Erika avatar

        Krama has it…

  11. Dan Antion avatar

    The gang’s all here. Quite a crew. Great story, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Dan. I enjoyed writing this one, although it ended much differently from the first draft.
      Happy Halloween.

      1. Dan Antion avatar

        It’s funny how that can happen in 99 words.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          I never publish the first draft of anything. I always sleep on every draft.

          1. Dan Antion avatar

            A good practice.

  12. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Happy Halloween, Hugh! :-)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Happy Halloween, Liesbet. 🎃

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