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A Matter Of Life – by Hugh W. Roberts

It was a matter of life or death. But if only she had known that she wasn’t the only one racing toward her child as he sunk toward the bottom of the ocean floor.

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As the creature snatched at the sinking, lifeless object, it used its other tentacle to grab the prey that pursued it and squeezed the life out of it. Now it could feed the offspring it had given birth to, which would otherwise have died on this strange, watery planet.

A mother had to do everything in her power to ensure the survival of her children.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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36 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – A Matter Of Life”

  1. Michael B. Fishman avatar

    This was a delicious tale Hugh with a nice little twist. We humans are so arrogant to believe that we’re the only creatures on the planet who eat and breath and love.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you enjoyed it, Michael. Even the tiniest of things on our planet have stories to tell.

  2. Liz H avatar

    Another very nice twist!

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  4. dgkaye avatar

    Well done Hugh, despite the sadness and desperation involved. A definite Hugh Roberts tale <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Debby. My dark side keeps shining through these short tales.

      1. dgkaye avatar

        It wouldn’t be Hugh Roberts writing if it didn’t . <3

  5. Norah avatar

    Good one, Hugh. All mother’s want to feed their babies, even if it is the baby of another mother. And the mother too!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Norah. Yes, a mother’s instinct is always to protect her children and ensure their survival, whatever the odds.

  6. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Even strange tentacled beings are mothers, too! Thanks for reminding us of that, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Exactly, Terri. And they have mouths to feed too.

  7. seaangel4444 avatar

    Brilliant, dear Hugh! You have this phenomenal ability to keep the reader riveted! I love it, and this story is wonderful! Cher xoxoxo

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Cher. I’m glad you enjoyed this piece of flash fiction. And what a lovely compliment about my writing. I’m honoured.

      1. seaangel4444 avatar

        I sure did, Hugh! I love your writing! Cher xoxoxo

  8. Colleen Chesebro: WordCraftPoetry avatar

    Oh this was a brilliant take on the mom theme, Hugh! Loved it!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Colleen. Glad you enjoyed it.

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  10. Gary A Wilson avatar

    Gulp…..
    Wow Hugh!
    What an image that was.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      A good one, I hope, Gary.

  11. willowdot21 avatar

    Mothers fight hard 💜💜💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      They do, regardless of what form they have.

      1. willowdot21 avatar
  12. noelleg44 avatar

    Mothers are mothers, wherever they are. Good one!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Exactly. Thank you.

  13. Erika avatar

    Wow, what started to appear tragic revealed just a natural mother instinct… no matter what being. Great story, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Erika. Glad you enjoyed it. A mother is a mother regardless of what form she has.

      1. Erika avatar

        I liked the message and how your wrapped it. Really good!

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Thanks, Erika. I always try and think out of the box for these flash fiction pieces.

          1. Erika avatar

            You can tell 👍

  14. Paul Ariss avatar
    Paul Ariss

    Good one. You’ve obviously got a dark side to your otherwise lovely nature Mr. Roberts….!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Paul. You’ll have to ask those that have met me. But, yes, I love the dark side of writing.

  15. Darlene avatar

    That’s a good one!! Your imagination knows no bounds.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      What a lovely compliment. Thank you, Darlene.

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