February 21, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the phrase, “I’d rather be…” You fill in what comes next. What would a character(s) rather be doing and why? How can you use the phrase as a literary device? Go where the prompt leads! Click here for full details.
Have We Been Here Before? – by Hugh W. Roberts
Five friends declared what they wanted from their lives while sitting around a table.
“I’d rather be sleeping with Angela’s husband than my husband,” declared Hilary.
“I’d rather be a loving housewife and mother than a successful sales executive who dies from stress,” stated Rose.
“I’d rather not be a murderer,” said Angela.
“I’d rather be anybody than Rose’s boss,” stated Claire.
“I’d rather be honest with you all,” announced Wendy, pulling out a gun. “I hate you all.”
“What’s the afterlife like?” asked a familiar voice from an unknown source. “I have five friends here asking the question.”
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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.
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So Wendy put an end to that conversation quick smart, and topped herself as well. I’m pleased I didn’t belong to that group of friends. Well done, Hugh. A perfect Hugh ending.
Thanks, Norah. Yes, I think Wendy had the right idea. Not a group of friends I’d like to be a part of.
It’s a sure way to end friendships. 😅
A completely suspenseful, superb surprise write to the prompt.
Thank you, Jules.
WOW, you got me and I liked it. Well done.
Thank you, Sue.
Delightfully grim.
Thank you.
You get me everytime 😜💜🇺🇦
I like that, Willow.
This was unexpected! 😱
Thank you.
You’re welcome
That’s an unexpected twist… but is there ever an expected one in your stories 🤔😂
I’ll surprise you all one day with no twist. But will that be the twist?
LOL!
LOL!
Whoa, I don’t know what I was expecting, but… whoa…not the kinds of friends we need, Hugh. Well done!
We never quite know what friendship is like, do we, Terri? It can often have a dark side that we don’t know anything about until it’s too late.
True confessions time can be most awkward!
And not a drop of alcohol was consumed.
Oh, Hugh… that was chilling! Wow!! I never saw that coming. 😳
Hi Colleen, I always love reading the words ‘ I never saw that coming.’
Ha, Ha! You are the best at getting those unexpected endings, Hugh. I always enjoy your surprises. ❤