August 5, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about an open door. It can be literal or metaphorical. What is behind the door? Who is seeking and why? As the writer, how will you manage the discovery? Go where the prompt leads!


What If? – by Hugh W. Roberts

As I watched figures going through the open door, not even the pattering of rain on the roof of the car took away the fear I felt.

“What if…”

As my hands gripped the steering wheel tightly, anxiety began to snowball out of control.

“What if..?”

The thoughts of home and a warm bed were welcoming and safe.

“What if..?”

As I drove away, the LGBT community, who I feared, would have to wait another two years before joining them behind the open door that led to non-judgmental new friends, a new life and being who I really was.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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30 responses to “What If? #flashfiction”

  1. Open Doors « Carrot Ranch Literary Community avatar

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  2. Charli Mills avatar

    Sometimes we miss out on what we don’t know is waiting to accept us. Courage is pushing through the door nonetheless. Wee written story, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Charli. I certainly learned my lesson after experiencing this scene, although it took me two years to realise my mistake.

  3. dgkaye avatar

    Great tension in this telling Hugh. :) xx

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad it came through, Debby. Thanks so much.

  4. Norah avatar

    I really felt that fear, Hugh. Two years is a long time to wait.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      It was, Norah. And now I look back and wonder what on earth I was afraid of. But I’m older and wiser now and would have done things differently. But I guess we can all look back and say the same thing.

      1. Norah avatar

        We can all be wiser in retrospect, Hugh.

  5. TanGental avatar

    I wanted the MP to be eaten, dissolved in acid, turned inside out by seeing the unseeable and you do a touching poignant little nugget… your stories really need a health warning.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      If this and all the others ever make it into Glimpses 3, then I’ll certainly add a health warning.

  6. janiejunebug avatar
    janiejunebug

    Nicely done.

    Love,
    Janie

  7. Aimer Boyz avatar
    Aimer Boyz

    Nice. You got all the angst in there, had me feeling sorry for the poor guy driving away…

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      In this piece, the big ‘what if..?’ for me was ‘What if there is somebody in there who knows me?’ What I never thought about at the time was if they were there, then why was I so afraid of them seeing me?

      1. Aimer Boyz avatar
        Aimer Boyz

        LOL! True :)

  8. JT Twissel avatar

    Nothing creates as much anxiety as the what ifs!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      You’re right. I just go for it these days, but I’m older and wiser than I was back then.

  9. willowdot21 avatar

    Nicely done Hugh

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar
      1. willowdot21 avatar

        Always a pleasure to read Hugh 💜

  10. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Wonderful inspiration and glimpse into the uncertainty you felt then, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Terri. You’re the only one (so far) to have picked up that’s it me in this piece of flash fiction.

      1. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

        Made sense to me, Hugh. Well done. I remember by brother’s struggle.

  11. Erika avatar

    One of those twists. Wonderful, Hugh!

      1. Erika avatar

        You are welcome, Hugh!

  12. Dan Antion avatar

    Well done, Hugh!

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