February 25 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the word frozen. It can be descriptive, character focused, action driven. Go out onto the ice and find a frozen story. Go where the prompt leads!


New Home – by Hugh W. Roberts

The frozen wastes of space were no place anymore for the light pink sphere.

It had travelled for thousands of years, but the icy blue planet ahead looked the only hope it had of survival.

The glowing rays of a young star rising in the east sent the alien into a potential thaw and deep sleep on this new world.

Millions of years later, it awoke to find new owners’ of the planet had built a city on top of where it had rested.

“Welcome to Wuhan’, it recorded, as it began the fightback to reclaim its new home.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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31 responses to “New Home #flashfiction”

  1. Norah avatar

    Plausible. I like it, Hugh. Well done.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar
  2. D. Avery @shiftnshake avatar

    As reasonable an explanation as I’ve yet heard.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Maybe I should remove the sci-fi tags I added, then?

  3. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    A beginning, or an ending? Great twist on the prompt, Hugh! Did you ever watch the series Battlestar Galactica on Sci-fi channel (not the old one from the 70s)? It ended the series in a mean twist and a look back in time. That’s all I’ll say in case you didn’t watch. But this ending reminds me of it :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      The story is still unfolding right in front of us, Terri. So who knows how it’s going to end?

      I wasn’t aware that Battlestar Galactica had been remade. That twist sounds awsome. I’ll have to find out if the series is available in the UK.

  4. willowdot21 avatar

    Oh! My this is so dastardly clever Hugh 💜💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Willow. I’m glad you think so.

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        I do Hugh 💜💜

  5. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Aha? That’s where it really came from. Thanks for clarifying this nasty occurrence, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Although I’ve tagged this story as science-fiction, I do wonder if it actually is, Liesbet.

  6. Erika avatar

    Oh!!! What a great take, Hugh, and the typical Hugh twist in the end…. lol

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Couldn’t resist another twist, Erika. This challenge was specially made for one.

      1. Erika avatar

        Oh, yes! It calls for a twist indeed!

  7. JT Twissel avatar

    Oh no! Another twisty twist. Love it.

  8. Retirement Reflections avatar

    Any story that begins as lyrically as “the frozen wastes of space” has my undivided attention! Well done!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Donna. I wanted to think out of the box with the keyword we had to use for this challenge. I know it’s been used before, so maybe I only got halfway out of that box.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you so much, Janis.

  9. tidalscribe avatar

    I love that, very clever!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Janet. As soon as I saw the prompt, I saw a sign saying Wuhan city.

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