Flash Fiction – Time To Leave, Time To Arrive

Time To Leave, Time To Arrive – by Hugh W. Roberts

“Good afternoon, transport helpline; how may I be of assistance?”

“Is that the transport helpline?”

“It is, yes. How may I be of assistance?”

“I’d like to book some transport, please.”

“For you, or is the transport for somebody else?”

“It’s for me.”

“Have you used us before?”

“Yes.”

“For security purposes, could you provide your password’s first and fourth letters?”

“W and T.”

“And your date, time and place of birth.”

“January fourteenth, Twenty-One-O-Five, St Mark’s Hospital, Cardiff, Wales.”

“Thank you. You are a little young to leave now, although you can book the transport up to twenty years in advance. Are you sure you want to go ahead and book now?”

“Yes.”

“And when would you like your transport to arrive?”

“Within the next hour, please.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yes.”

“Let me check if your driver is available. Some chillout music will play to keep you relaxed while we check your driver’s availability. Please hold the line.”

(Several minutes later)

“Good news, your driver is available and will be with you at ten past eight. Please ensure you have the correct payment. We no longer accept American Express.”

“Thank you.”

(Ten past eight.)

“Your driver has arrived. Enjoy your trip, Mr Evans. Thank you for visiting. We hope you enjoyed your stay.”

“Hello, Mr Evans, I’m Mary, your driver. You probably won’t remember me, but I transported you into this world. Mine will have been the first face you saw and the first hands to touch you.”

“Hello, Mary. Pleased to meet you again.”

“My goodness, did you scream when I delivered you into this world. You screamed the hospital down. Already had enough of this place, yes?”

“Yes, they’re destroying this planet. It’s time to move on. Please transport me to my next destination. I hope your hands are warm this time.”

Image of a space age midwife holding a newly delivered baby in her hands inside a spaceship
Time to leave, time to arrive

Written for Esther Chilton’s writing prompt – Transport.

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41 responses to “Flash Fiction – Time To Leave, Time To Arrive”

  1. Did You Miss Any Of These? Monthly Round-Up - September 2024 avatar

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  2. Janis @ RetirementallyChallenged.com avatar

    I enjoyed your story, Hugh. The only thing that’s hard to believe is that people will still be around in the 2100s destroying our planet (I’m not that optimistic…).

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That is too true, Janis. At first, I set the story in the near future but decided it was a little too close for comfort.

  3. Mr. Ohh's Sideways View avatar

    This one is fascinating. I like it. 🤣😎🙃

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed this piece of flash into the future.

  4. Carol anne avatar

    That was good Hugh! 😃

    Your good at writing flash fiction!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Carol Anne. Flash fiction has become my favourite type of writing.

  5. Jennie avatar

    Nice! I like the ‘warm hands’.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Having warm hands makes all the difference, Jennie. Thanks so much for reading.

      1. Jennie avatar

        Yes, it does. You’re welcome, Hugh.

  6. Eugi avatar

    What a great story, Hugh! I didn’t expect the twist at the end and it made me smile.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      If it made you smile, my job is done, Eugi. Glad you enjoyed it.

  7. V.M.Sang avatar

    An enjoyable tale. I loved the twist at the end that brought it all together.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad that the final line brought the story together. Thank you for giving it a go.

  8. D. Wallace Peach avatar

    Great story, Hugh. I enjoyed so many parts of this – the initial mystery, the unfolding sci-fi elements, and how so little changes in through time in terms of “Some chillout music will play to keep you relaxed while we….” Lol. That line cracked me up. And there was something appealing about being able to leave this world and go to the next when humans wreck the planet in one way or another. And all in dialog. So skillfully done. :-)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I enjoy writing stories using dialogue, Diana. Maybe I should have been a screenwriter. With dialogue, I find I can really immerse myself in the characters. It was a fun piece to put together. It took me about three weeks to write, with Mary only coming into the story last weekend after watching a TV show that gave me the idea for her.
      Glad you enjoyed it, thank you.

      1. D. Wallace Peach avatar

        It was seamless. Really fun.

  9. Colleen Chesebro avatar

    What a great story! It’s good to see you writing flash fiction again, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’ve been writing about one piece a month, Colleen. Much less than I used to, but the upcoming change of season always gets my creative cogs working again.

      1. Colleen Chesebro avatar

        I need to get back to writing 99 words. I really miss the practice. I hope Charli brings the challenge back. Great job on your story, Hugh. I enjoyed it! I’m still working on my book. It’s definitely a process. LOL!

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          I spoke with Charli recently, and she mentioned that she would return. I do hope so, Colleen.

          Good luck with the new book. I look forward to hearing all about it.

          1. Colleen Chesebro avatar

            It’s been such a busy summer. As soon as I get the new poetry challenge up and running, I’ll get back to it to writing my book.

            Robbie and I are co-editing a Sunflower Tanka Journal. Submissions open October 1-31, 2024. I hope you will check us out.

            Yay! I can’t wait for Carrot Ranch to return. I love those 99 word stories. 🧡

  10. Author Jan Sikes avatar

    The more this world deteriorates and hatred expands, the more appealing this option sounds. Great short!!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Maybe, one day, Jan? Who knows? I like to think that the human race will survive, somehow.

  11. Becky Ross Michael avatar

    Enjoyed your story, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Did you? Thank you, Becky Rose. Was there anything particular you liked about it?

      1. Becky Ross Michael avatar

        I like the way you slowly led the reader into the realization of who this was and where they were headed:)

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Thank you, Becky Rose. That’s great feedback that I will work more on.

  12. Erika avatar

    Oh, I love this story. You found a very soulful and loving way to convey the beginning and ending of a journey. And it takes the darkness of the death matter.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you loved it, Erika. So many of us are afraid of the end, so it’s nice to think of positive ways it comes to us (if there is an end?)

      1. Erika avatar

        Yes, exactly… if there is an end… Love that too!

  13. Cathy avatar

    I don’t think I’d like to be here when everything ends either, Hugh. This seems a good compromise…if only!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Perhaps one day, Cathy. I’d like to think so, anyway.

  14. Esther Chilton avatar

    What a great response to the prompt, Hugh. I really did enjoy the futuristic story. It made me smile towards the end when your character meets Mary. The last line finishes it perfectly. If it’s okay with you, I’ll add it to my prompts blog post this Wednesday.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Esther. I’d had the story in mind since I saw the prompt when you first published it, but other stuff stopped me from writing it. But I’m glad I waited because an episode of ‘Casualty’ on TV over the weekend gave me the idea to add Mary into the story.

      Please go ahead and add it to your next writing prompt post.

      1. Esther Chilton avatar

        Thank you, Hugh. I often find a programme or chat on the radio adds that something to my stories. I think Mary was a great addition.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          I’m the same here, Esther. I get many ideas from watching TV and listening to the radio. Even the lyrics in a song can ignite something.

  15. dgkaye avatar

    I loved this Hugh. I was only surprised that it’s already 2105 and only just becoming enough to run away from. :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Debby. I extended the date, hoping Mary would collect me intact when my best-by date was up. I don’t want to be here when everything ends.

      1. dgkaye avatar

        I’m with you! :)

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