From Esther Chilton’s blog: Writing prompt – Dreams: Do you have a dream you yearn to fulfil? Maybe yours has come true. Or perhaps you’ve had strange, funny, or recurring dreams. But not everyone remembers their dreams, so you could write something fictional and give your characters all sorts of interesting dreams.


Life On The Edge Of Dreams – by Hugh W. Roberts

Daydreaming was a serene escape, a cherished pastime. I would recline on my favourite piece of freshly mowed lawn, taking in the grassy odours while gazing up at the clouds as they playfully chased each other across the sky, their movements a soothing sight.

“It’s time to come in,” my mother’s voice would echo, breaking the silence of my obliviousness. “You’ll catch your death of cold laying on the damp, cool grass, dear.”

But I would bide my time, waiting for the familiar sounds of my father stowing away the lawnmower and other tools in the shed to fade. Only then would I rise, dust myself of grass cuttings, and return to the house, a place steeped in dreams and comforting familiarity. 

Entering the kitchen, I observed my parents, their faces a canvas of shared memories, dreams, and contentment. As they savoured tea and custard creams, I’d drift into daydreams of the past that I found difficult to articulate. Yet, in those dreams, I could hear their unspoken thoughts about me and the spot on the lawn where they had lovingly scattered my ashes, a place my father had vowed to preserve forever.

Life on the edge of dreams is the perfect resting spot.


Written for Esther Chilton’s writing prompt – Dreams.

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23 responses to “Flash Fiction – Life On The Edge Of Dreams”

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  3. dgkaye avatar

    Great story Hugh. You’ve managed to capture a great blend of both heartfelt with a ‘Hugh Roberts’ twist of eerie. <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good to hear, Debby. Those twists keep demanding I use them in my flash fiction.

      1. dgkaye avatar

        It’s part of your writing personality Hugh. Don’t lose it! :) x

  4. willowdot21 avatar

    That is just so beautiful and sad Hugh 💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Willow. I’m glad you thought so.

  5. Author Jan Sikes avatar

    I love the twist at the end of your flash fiction, Hugh. Well done!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Jan. So you didn’t see that twist coming?

      1. Author Jan Sikes avatar

        No, I did not. Great job with it!

  6. Dave Williams avatar

    A serene description of lounging on the grass, then the surprise. You wove the mention of ashes so smoothly, it comes as a startlement. But when I went backward in the story, I realized you set up the surprise with the mother’s warning about catching death by cold. We’ll crafted!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Dave, that’s great feedback on my piece of flash fiction, thanks so much for giving more detail. It helps me when it comes to writing more flash fiction. Thanks again.

  7. JT Twissel avatar

    Lovely Hugh. I generally daydream on long car rides. I think it’s because as a child my family took several cross country trips where there was little to do but daydream!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I recall play i-spy on car journeys, but if it was a long car journey, it did not take long to get bored and go to daydreaming instead.

  8. Esther Chilton avatar

    Really lovely, Hugh. Warm memories.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you liked it, Esher. Thanks so much for the prompt.

      1. Esther Chilton avatar

        Would you mind if I published it on my site next Wednesday? I want to check with you first. No problem if not.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Please do, Esther. I’d be honoured if you did.

          1. Esther Chilton avatar

            Thank you so much 😁

  9. joylennick avatar

    Think ancient…As an evacuee in World War 11, I lived for a while on a mountain (Hare) in Wales with a lovely Aunt and went to bed by candlelight. My dreams (I read until ‘candle out!’ time )were often weird. All these years later, I can still recall two. One, when witches threatened to drown me in an air-raid ‘water-tank,’ and the other when a Spitfire plane flew overhead and threw down eggs and bacon…!! Much more recently, I dreamt a horde of Vikings were coming to tea (really!) No wonder I’m a writer… (no poetic licence…) Best wishes.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you for sharing those dreams with us, Joy. I especially love the one about the vikings. Some people say dreams have meanings behind them, but I’m at a loss as to what the meanings behind your dreams are. Dreaming via candlelight sounds lovely, through.
      Sweet dreams.

      1. joylennick avatar

        Thank you.

        I’ve never been completely able to work out any sensible significance of them…Just put me down as ‘odd.’ I never wanted to be one of the ‘flock…’ Best wishes. ‘

  10. beth avatar

    lovely, Hugh –

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