January 30, 2024, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about something made of walnut. How can the object expand a story? Who is the maker? How old is the object? What is its significance? Go where the prompt leads!

Friends, Emotions And An Object Made Of Walnut – by Hugh W. Roberts

I’m glad they liked my choice of walnut. It’s always been a favourite of mine.

“It’s beautiful.”

“They say walnut is the best, and by gosh, they’re right. He’d have absolutely loved it.”

“Doesn’t it polish up nicely? Look at the shine.”

“I wonder how much it cost? Such a shame.”

“A shame? He’d have loved it.”

“How do you know?”

Those were the final words I heard, apart from a serious-sounding muffled voice.

And how true it is about hearing being the final sense to go as your coffin gets lowered into the flames.

Flaming walnut. Great choice.


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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17 responses to “Flash Fiction – Friends, Emotions And An Object Made Of Walnut!”

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  3. Eugi avatar

    Whoa! I love the unexpected twist at the end, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. I’m glad you never saw that twist coming, Eugi.

      1. Eugi avatar

        You’re welcome, Hugh!

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    Anonymous

    I never heard that about the hearing.
    Fun flash!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’ve heard it many times and always wondered how people know.

      Your comment is showing as ‘anonymous.’ Could you let me know who you are and how you left your comment? Did you leave it via the WordPress/Jetpack app, or directly on the WordPress site on a laptop or desktop?

  5. Author Jan Sikes avatar

    A cool story, Hugh! Loved the twist.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good to hear, Jan. Glad you never saw the twist coming.

  6. JT Twissel avatar

    Oh my – seems a shame to burn a good piece of oak but I guess we do it all the time in fire places!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      We do, although we all seem happy to sit in front of a fireplace for much longer.

  7. Dan Antion avatar

    At least the coffin took a nice shine. I’m sure he would have wanted that, albeit not just yet. Great story, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you enjoyed it, Dan. I always wonder coffins have to look so shinny.

  8. Becky Ross Michael avatar

    Neat story! I had guessed the coffin but not the flames:)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      You got half the twist then, Becky. I had an idea that the twist in this story was not as hidden as others I’ve done.

  9. Carol anne avatar

    Good piece of flash fiction, Hugh!
    Very enjoyable!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you enjoyed it, Carol anne. I hope it’s not true about hearing being the last sense to go, though. I hope it goes a lot sooner.

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