June 27, 2023, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story responding to “We’ve received your complaint.” Who has received the complaint and why? How was the complaint delivered — with grace, humour, vitriol? Go where the prompt leads! See June 27: Story Challenge in 99-words for more details.
An Unexpected Response – by Hugh W. Roberts
“We’ve received your complaint,” the email whispered through the screen.
Sarah’s blood ran cold. How did they know? She had never told a soul about the scratching sounds that echoed from her attic at night.
The email continued, “We apologise for the disturbance caused by our spectral resident. Rest assured; our exorcist team will investigate the paranormal activity.”
Dread clutched Sarah’s heart. She’d never have expected a reply, let alone a promise to banish the unseen entity.
The attic door creaked open as she stared at her inbox, revealing a shadowy figure.
Her complaint had caught the ghost’s attention.
Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.
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Hugh, this was so good. I love the way you created suspense. The last line was chilling. Excellent piece.
I’m glad you thought so. Thanks, Colleen.
You’re welcome, Hugh.
Excellent Hugh, both stories 💜💜
Thanks, Willow.
A pleasure Hugh 💜💜
Now this is creepy, Hugh! Mind-reading spirits–we are doomed! I’ve been slowly watching the Netflix series Supernatural of late. I can’t watch it every day–pretty intense. But the spirits the guys encounter are scary!
I remember a TV show called Supernatural, Terri. Is it the same series on Netflix? It was made about 20 years ago I think. It was about two brothers who investigated paranormal activity. I enjoyed watching it, so may give it another go.
That’s the show! It’s a little dark so I prefer to watch earlier in the evenings 😁
Very scary, Hugh.
Glad you thought so. Thanks, Norah.
Perfectly eerie with your signature ending Hugh. 🙂
I’m glad you think so, thanks, Debby.
Your ability to evoke emotions and create a haunting atmosphere is commendable. I was thoroughly engaged throughout the entire story. Well done! 🙂
Thank you very much for great feedback on this piece of flash fiction. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
It must be dark inside that head of yours
Or, as is often the case, the lights are in but nobody is at home.
I agree with Erika, sounds like the beginning of something.
Thanks, Danny. These pieces of flash often beg for more, but I like allowing the reader to decide what happened next.
I agree with Erika. You’ve left us hanging here Hugh.
I did love this spooky story Hugh. An interesting take on a complaint … which reminds me, I need to write a complaint when I get home
Thanks, Brenda. Sometimes, these short pieces of flash want more attention, but I like to leave them as they are and allow the reader to imagine the story further.
I understand Hugh. You need to draw the line somewhere
Exactly. Cheers, Brenda.
Hugh that calls loudly for a sequel!!!
Nooooooo! Don’t say that, Erika. These flash pieces are meant to be all on their own, although it can depend on next week’s prompt.
I know, it is not meant to become a series… but I so wonder… lol. I hope next week’s prompt supports a sequel 😇
Well, I’m glad you thought it was worth a sequel, Erika. Thank you.
I do hope this is a friendly ghost!
Somehow, I don’t think so, especially given Sarah was thinking of complaining about his/her presence.
Well done. Be careful what you wish for.
Exactly, Dan. Even thinking a wish has its dangers.