November 28, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the saying, “not my monkeys, not my circus”. What is the situation that would spawn that aphorism? Have fun with the setting and characters! Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.

Christmas Present – by Hugh W. Roberts

Watching the happy couple unwrap their gifts brought so much joy and happiness. I love Christmas.

One last gift, but who’s the recipient?

“The tag says it’s for you; somebody from your past?” said Veronica.

“Me?” replied David.

He hesitated at first, but his face was a picture when he pulled out red fishnet stockings and suspenders.

The atmosphere changed before death arrived. But it would be the next Christmas before they joined me.

Not my monkeys, not my circus,” I laughed as I walked out of their lives unnoticed.

Nobody cheated on me, the ghost of Christmas past.


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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12 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Christmas Present”

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  2. dgkaye avatar

    Fabulous short Hugh. This was a true Hugh Roberts Christmas telling! <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Debby. Christmas still brings out the dark side of me.

      1. dgkaye avatar

        Lol Hugh. :)

  3. Urspo avatar

    This certainly makes Dickens a more interesting read. Beats Little Dorrit by a country mile.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. I’ve never been compared to Dickens before. Now I need to find a top hat.

  4. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Great job on this prompt, Hugh, combining Christmas Carol lore with the “not my circus” theme! A chilling end awaits the couple!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks so much, Terri. I had no idea what the phrase ‘Not my monkeys, not my circus’ meant. I’ve never heard it before and don’t know of anyone who used it. So I had to look it up and gave it a dark ending.

      1. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

        I chuckle at the phrase–it seems apt and even more so right after I retired!

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Yes, the same for me when leaving my last job for the final time.

  5. Norah avatar

    Sounds like getting revenge beyond the grave. Who would have thought Hugh would write something like that! 😂

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I know, right? One of these days, I’m going to have to write a happy ending again, Norah.

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