August 8, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about “the one who left the dress.” A 1940s-era dress still hangs in an abandoned house. Who left it and why? You can take any perspective and write in any genre. It can be a ghost story. Or not. Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.


The Ghost In The Dress – by Hugh W. Roberts

The ghost always returned on the night of February 14th. Dressed in World War II uniform, we’d watch as it undressed and put on the dress we’d found behind the wood panelling in the main bedroom.

Our mother didn’t want to keep the dress in the house. She referred to it as an evil piece of cloth, but we couldn’t allow her to dispose of this piece of 1940s history.

“Does it still fit me?” the ghost always asked.

We’d nod our heads, smile and reply with the same answer.

“Yes. And you look so pretty in it, David.”

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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31 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – The Ghost In The Dress”

  1. Liz H avatar

    Hurrah! David finally got the appreciation he deserved! Nice twist!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      He did, yes. Thank you, Liz.

  2. Renard Moreau avatar
    Renard Moreau

    🙂 Hugh, that short piece of writing was brilliant and highly entertaining.

    Do enjoy the rest of your day, my friend.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you for the great feedback, Renard.

  3. Norah avatar

    Well done, Hugh. Your stories never disappoint. Always a twist.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Norah. That is high praise.

      1. Norah avatar

        From downunder. :)

  4. TanGental avatar

    As usual a lovely twist though I might be freaked like mother…

  5. Linda Schaub avatar

    I like your twists in your Flash Fiction posts Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Linda. I enjoy writing them.

  6. Janis @ RetirementallyChallenged.com avatar

    I wonder if he was the boogie-woogie bugle boy from Company B? Great twist!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Who knows, Janis? He may well have been.

  7. Darlene avatar

    A great take on the topic, Hugh. I love the twist at the end.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Darlene. Glad you liked that twist.

  8. Danny Watts avatar

    Flash fiction with a twist – very good

  9. Erika avatar

    Whatever I expected, it was definitely not the last sentence 😅

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s great to hear. I thought some readers might get the twist in this piece. But, so far, so good.

      1. Erika avatar

        You are a twist master, Hugh!

  10. noelleg44n avatar

    Great twist, Hugh. Loved this!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Noelle. I aim to please with these pieces of flash.

  11. willowdot21 avatar

    Always a double twist Hugh I like it 💜💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Willow. I had a feeling that some would guess the twist, but so far, neither of you has. That makes me happy.

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        Aha you have us there then! 🤔

  12. tidalscribe.com avatar

    Ha ha, great ending.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. Glad you think so. Although I’ve a feeling, that some will guess the twist.

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