Flash Fiction Friday – From Darkness To Light

August 1, 2022, prompt: Write a story that features someplace remote in 99 words (no more, no less). It can be a wild sort of terrain or the distance between people. What is the impact of a remote place? Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.

From Darkness To Light – by Hugh W. Roberts

Although Fatima knew this remote, off-the-radar place had existed for many years, she’d never plucked up the courage to visit it.

But instead of the darkness, isolation and dread she’d heard existed inside; she found her true self when stepping through the door.

Throwing off the shackles of a life lived as a lie, she swapped it for one she knew she wanted. Gliding toward the lights, she danced while being watched by rainbow-coloured faces.

As happiness finally filled her life and laughter filled her lungs, she decided she would tell her husband she was gay in the morning.


Image of a map showing a remote location
Image Credit: Charli Mills

Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.


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40 thoughts on “Flash Fiction Friday – From Darkness To Light

  1. As we’ve become more aware in life it sometimes leads to a certain sadness for people who still, for whatever reasons, have to live lives they weren’t born to live. This story had a nice ending that made that reality seem better and further away.

    1. I think we all need some good positive outcomes every now and again, Terri. I’m going to have to check out The Outer Limits. You say there is a new one? I hope I can find it somewhere on British TV.

      1. You remember the old Outer Limits I’m sure, Hugh. A new version came out in the late 90s??, not sure when but it was more modern and refreshed. It had the usual darkness but a few hopeful themes mixed in. I hope you can find it.

        1. I thought it may have been a newer version, like Twilight Zone’s recent two new seasons, Terri. However, I’ll check around for The Outer Limits from the 90s. I’m sure it’ll be airing somewhere on British TV.

        2. I’ve checked, and the 1990s seasons are not available on Prime in the UK, Terri. However, I’ve other options (such as Youtube) to check. I’ll check out the episode you recommend too.

      1. I’m almost finished on my book 2 draft, and it’s based in the early 2000s exploring this, precisely. Two of my male characters from Book 1 who realised there was more than friendship between them, and how they navigate life, behind the backs of the community, who would not, especially at that time, accept a same-sex relationship…
        Hiding behind false marriages, or almost, abd ultimately living their life, but hiding it from their loved ones.

        1. I can imagine what those characters are going through, Ritu. It’s like all those LGBT athletes competing in the Commonwealth games from countries where being gay is still illegal. Sadly, being gay is still a crime in many counties. We’ve come a long way since the early 2000s, but there is still much to do.

        2. Absolutely. I see the younger generations in my community being more open, and accepting (but not all of them 😢) and it’s a vast difference to even 20 years ago where everything bar heteronormal relationships were taboo…
          🤗 🌈

  2. Wow, I love that story. Your words do give the feeling of walls breaking down and finally being able to breathe again. Btw. my sister and her girlfriend are going to marry next year.

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