The Two Faces Of Freedom

June 20, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about what freedom feels like. Whose point of view do you use? Does the idea of freedom cause tension or bring hope? Let the reader feel the freedom. Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.


The Two Faces Of Freedom – by Hugh W. Roberts

Freedom had been escaping her prison cell.

Freedom was feeling the cool rain on her face having been shut away for nearly 25 years.

Freedom was feeling the grass on her bare feet.

Freedom led her to the safety of the light ahead in the darkness that closed in on her.

“HELP ME!”

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She had enjoyed freedom for the last 25 years. She was free to do whatever she wanted, see whoever she wanted, and go wherever she wanted.

But for nearly an hour, freedom was no longer hers until she shot dead the running figure coming towards her.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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22 responses to “The Two Faces Of Freedom”

  1. cav12 avatar

    Nice twist to the ending, Hugh. Freedom is not all what we expect!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. Freedom has many different meanings and isn’t always good.

      1. cav12 avatar

        That is true.

  2. D. Wallace Peach avatar

    Fascinating story, Hugh. I was intrigued and read it twice. This is one to think about.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Diana. I always like it when readers tell me that one of my stories makes them think about what they’ve just read.

  3. Liz H avatar

    So well done! Two faces but perhaps also mirrors of each other and through a glass darkly!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. Yes, there is certainly a Twilight Zone feel to this story.

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  5. Erika avatar

    That is a very thought-provoking piece, Hugh. Very metaphoric and again, this twist at the end…

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Erika. I’m glad these 99 words I write are making some readers think. I believe there are two sides to everything.

      1. Erika avatar

        I definitely believe so too, Hugh!! And yes, your 99 words stories never fail to activate your mind… and heart!

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Thank you, Erika. Have a super weekend.

          1. Erika avatar

            Thank you, you too 🌞

  6. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Hmm, freedom….not all that it’s cracked up to be, Hugh, as you tell it. I agree, a story to ponder.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Terri.

      Glad you saw the otherside of freedom that I did. It isn’t always what we think it’s going to be. And sometimes, we humans will do anything to get it back.

  7. Dan Antion avatar

    Wow! Great story, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Dan. Glad you thought so. I enjoyed writing this piece. But if you saw the first draft, you’d have been snoring.

  8. willowdot21 avatar

    Oh! Hugh this is a make you think story 💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I love it when my flash fiction pieces do that to readers, Willow.

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        Brilliant Hugh 😊

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