February 14, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about zippers. What are the zippers for? What challenges do they present to the story? Go where the prompt leads! Click here for full details.


Don’t Do This With New Clothes – by Hugh W. Roberts

She’d been lucky. Nobody had noticed the price tag still attached to the dress she wore at the Christmas party.

While packing up the dress into the returns envelope to get a full refund, she noticed a zip just above the hem inside the dress.

‘That wasn’t there before,’ she announced.

Unzipping the mysterious zip, she placed her hand inside the hole. A hand grabbed her and pulled her inside the dress, but nobody heard her scream.

Although her husband filed a missing person report, she was never found and lived in darkness for the rest of her years.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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53 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Don’t Do This With New Clothes”

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  2. Gloria avatar

    Let this be a lesson to all the others who do this! Good one Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Gloria. The idea for this piece of flash came from people I know who did what was going on in this piece.

  3. Michael B. Fishman avatar

    This is one person who won’t be trying to steal clothes anymore! I know someone who worked in a clothing store who had a similar experience taking a return on a ‘new’ dress that was obviously used because she found ticket stubs and a tissue in the pocket. This was a fun story!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I know a few people who have played the ‘wear and return’ trick, Michael. Not me, though. I’d hate to end up being pulled into a pocket that I could never get out of.

  4. Liz H avatar

    Thunderstruck! What a clever take on the prompt!

  5. Sam "Goldie" Kirk avatar

    Mysterious! A great start to a lengthier piece.

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  7. dgkaye avatar

    Lol, karma will get you. The perfect Hugh Roberts story. :) x

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      It will, indeed. Thanks, Debby.

  8. Charli Mills avatar

    This proves it, Hugh! I always knew dresses were dangerous! I love how your mind thinks and how well you write the unexpected.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Charli. This was great fun to write.

  9. Marsha avatar

    Congratulations, this post is featured on Story Chat, Hugh. Thanks for taking the time to comment and for supporting Story Chat from the very beginning. https://alwayswrite.blog/2022/02/22/story-chat-y2-summary-handle-with-caution-by-kl-caley/

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