May 27, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes tiny flying insects. Think about how the insects shape the scene or add to the action. Go where the prompt leads!


Murder In Picnic Wood – by Hugh W. Roberts

Swatting away the tiny flying insects from around her, Mary turned to her husband and demanded they headed home.

“It’s too hot, too humid, and these insects are bugging me.” 

Laughing at what he thought was a joke, Micheal picked up a can of insect repellant while the persistent nagging carried on. 

“Use it! Use it!” demanded Mary.

Two hours later, Michael opened a can of cold beer in the garden of his now nag-free life. ‘I must buy more insect repellant,’ he told himself. 

Twenty-three miles away, the tiny flying insects feasted on what remained in Picnic Wood. 

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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66 responses to “Murder In Picnic Wood #flashfiction”

  1. Marje @ Kyrosmagica avatar

    I’m staying well away from you Hugh when you have insect repellent in your hands! Great story. :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Marje. Don’t worry. I stopped killing insects with repellent years ago. Now I just open the doors and windows and order them to leave.

      1. Marje @ Kyrosmagica avatar

        Lol. That made me laugh Hugh. One year we had a hornet infestation in our upstairs hallway. I didn’t envy the pest control guy!

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Oh, I don’t think I’d argue with a group of hornets. I’d ask security to deal with that.

          1. Marje @ Kyrosmagica avatar

            Yes! I’m with you on that!

  2. D. Wallace Peach avatar

    That’s some strong bug-repellent. But it worked! Great story, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      But was it the repellent or what contained it that was the killer, Diana?

      1. D. Wallace Peach avatar

        Either way, very effective!

  3. robertawrites235681907 avatar

    Ooooh! Nasty man, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I guess so, but was he driven to do it, Robbie?

      1. robertawrites235681907 avatar

        Probably, but he could have buried her. The idea of mosquitos and flies feasting on a body is a bit revolting.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          I have a feeling he wanted to get arrested for what he had done.

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  5. Marsha avatar

    That will teach us wives to watch our nagging during a picnic. She even begged for it. Yikes! That was a real stinger!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I think the same can be said about nagging husbands too. Glad you enjoyed it.

      1. Marsha avatar

        Let’s see, what was that insect repellent made of? :) JK

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Maybe the contents were not what killed Mary?

          1. Marsha avatar

            I hadn’t considered that it was deliberate from his last statement. Or maybe something else entirely – like the guy who fell backwards into the Grand Canyon taking a selfie.

            1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

              It’s one of the reasons why I love writing open endings.

            2. Marsha avatar

              You are the king of open endings. Are you about ready to do another Story Chat? How about in October again? There aren’t any universal holidays before then are there? I think you should do another October story as an anniversary post.

            3. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

              I think that’s it (Holiday wise) until Halloween. If you have enough stories to continue Story Chat that will take us up to October, I’d be delighted to write a new story for October.

            4. Marsha avatar

              Yay, whoopee!! I’m jumping up and down with glee! :) That will mark our big year anniversary. I consider this your project as well because it would not have happened without you. I just host and take care of it. You birthed it. :)

  6. A. M. Yeager avatar
    A. M. Yeager

    Nice! Your writing packs quite the punch.

  7. dgkaye avatar

    Okay, that was some creepy ending. You never disappoint Hugh. <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Debby. I always aim to please with my endings. If I’m not happy with it, it doesn’t get published.

      1. dgkaye avatar

        And that’s why you never disappoint. :) xx

  8. Liz H avatar

    Oh my! You went just a wee bit dark with this one…
    :-D :-D

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Just a little, yes. But it proves that a can of insect repellant can kill more than just insects.

      1. Liz H avatar

        Noted. Enemies beware! 🙈😆

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