Comfort Food #flashfiction

“Strawberry cheesecake ice cream? A family-sized fruit and nut chocolate bar? Iced-coconut sponge? What the heck is going on, Simon?”

“Comfort, you said, so I got you some of your favourite comfort foods. I thought the popcorn would bring back memories of our first date. These will all make you feel better. Oh, there’s one more thing.”

Julia rummaged around the shopping bag, hoping he’d got her what she wanted.

“Hot-cross buns? Are you kidding me? When I said comfort, I meant something I could put on my piles so I could sit down and be more comfortable!”

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Written in response to Charli Mills 99-word flash fiction challenge with the theme of comfort food.

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45 responses to “Comfort Food #flashfiction”

  1. Teagan Geneviene avatar

    Haha. Should have gotten “doughnuts.” :D I suppose that’s about the only time comfort food is not good. Mega hugs.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Indeed, Teagan. At least Julia could have used those doughnuts in another way for comfort.
      Hugs to you.
      xx

  2. susanzutautas avatar
    susanzutautas

    LOL! Thanks for the laugh today.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      You’re welcome, Susan. Glad to have made you laugh.

  3. Norah avatar

    Hilarious, Hugh. Though I’m not sure about food comforting piles. Maybe ice cream could take the heat off a bit. :)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Indeed, Norah. Although, I’d probably find doing that a bit of waste. 😀

  4. Donna avatar
    Donna

    When reading your flash fiction, Hugh, I immediately begin to look for the ‘twist.’ This story did not disappoint. Well done!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I just can’t help myself, Donna. One of these days, I’ll have to write something without a twist. I bet that would shock some of my readers more than some of my stories do.

  5. houstonphotojourney avatar

    Hugh to be inside your head for a day would be a blast! 😂

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Oh, I don’t know, Elizabeth. Not when it comes to emptying the laundry basket. You wouldn’t want to be there when that happens. 😀

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  6. floridaborne avatar

    Anyone who has ever had piles can tell you that food is the last thing giving you comfort. :-)

    I liked your take on the prompt.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Oh, I know all about it.

      Thank you. I almost didn’t publish this, but am glad I did. 😀

  7. dgkaye avatar

    Lol Hugh. I think Simon was hot and cross because his buns weren’t be looked after! LOLOL :) xx

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I think Julia may have given him some hot cross buns after what he did. I know I would have, Debby. 😀
      xx

      1. dgkaye avatar

        Lol, I love this type of ‘pun’ writing almost. Perhaps that can be another book for you???? You have such a gift for twisty endings, keep using it! :) xx

        1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

          Another book? Now you got me thinking. 😀
          xx

          1. dgkaye avatar

            As if those wheel weren’t even already turning? :) <3

            1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

              They probably need a bit of oiling. 😀

            2. dgkaye avatar

              Lol :) xx

  8. jjspina avatar

    LOL! 😂🤣

  9. D. Wallace Peach avatar

    It’s the thought that counts! Ha ha. :-)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      That’s what was in my mind when I wrote this, Diana 😀

  10. teri again avatar

    I love this. 😄😄

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thanks, Teri. Almost didn’t publish it, but something was nagging at me to press ‘publish’.

  11. robbiesinspiration avatar

    These comfort foods all sound great to me. Super paragraph, Hugh.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I could have added so much more, Robbie, but 99 words were such a challenge. 😀
      Thank you.

  12. mikealixonline avatar

    Then there’s always comfort hemlock.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I had to look it up, but so it seems.

  13. Darlene avatar

    A good one! LOL

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thanks, Darlene. 😀
      Happy Sunday. 🌞

  14. Ritu avatar

    😂😂😂 you forgot the Maltesers!!!

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Simon ate those on the way back because he thought they’d divert attention to Julia’s problem. 😮

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