Flash Fiction – Life And Death In The City

From Esther Chilton’s blog: Writing prompt – Cities: One of my favourite cities is Rome. I’ll never forget the way the Colosseum took my breath away as I stood in the middle, the sights and sounds of the years before playing out before me. What cities have you been to? What special memories do they hold? Perhaps a city could be the backdrop for a story or poem.


Life And Death In The City – by Hugh W. Roberts

From the highest building, the city landscape held him in its thrall. His fist clenched, while his other arm stretched out, his eyes roamed from side to side, taking in the buildings, green spaces, transport, and every aspect of the city he adored. But the people? They were a different story.

From the moment he stepped foot in the city, a profound bond was formed. Every street, corner, and building became a part of him, intertwining with his very essence. For three glorious years, he thrived as a quintessential city man, his love for the city growing deeper with each passing day. But when he lost his job, a seismic shift occurred in his world. The concept of change was foreign to him, but the city, his beloved, seemed to be craving it, or so he thought.

As he gazed at the bustling, unfriendly crowds flowing into the city hall below, where he once worked, he realised that the city desperately needed a nucleus of change.

Eighteen minutes later, he found himself with his back turned only a few steps away from the imposing doors of city hall. He stood there, gazing up at the place he had been earlier, his mind a tempest of thoughts, each one questioning why he had even considered such a drastic step as jumping. The struggle within him was not just a storm, but a hurricane, his heart and mind locked in a fierce battle.

People tutted and gave him dirty looks as he blocked their path. The smell of their body odour hit his nostrils, making him feel sick.

‘Always in a rush! Why are these unclean city people always in a rush?’ he asked himself.

“Get out of the f-ing way,” somebody shouted at him as they pushed by him. “Idiot!”

“Idiot? Me?” he bellowed, his voice brimming with a potent blend of defiance and uncertainty. ‘Not me.’ he assured himself. ‘For I’m the one who can spark the change this city so desperately craves. It doesn’t deserve people like you.’

Minutes later, inside city hall, the first change to the city occurred.

“I’VE COME HERE TO SAVE YOU!” he screamed. Moments later, he pushed the trigger he’d held in his clenched hand, something he’d planned meticulously until he’d found himself looking down from the top of that building. As the almighty bang of the bombs went off, a sound reverberated through the halls, symbolising the start of a new era for the city. Without his action, it would never have survived.

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Written for Esther Chilton’s writing prompt – Cities.


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28 responses to “Flash Fiction – Life And Death In The City”

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  2. Jennie avatar

    This was terrific, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. I’m glad you thought so, Jennie. Was there anything in particular that made you say so?

      1. Jennie avatar

        It was a very real projection of the mind of someone who is on the edge. More importantly, the story gives readers a chance to ‘walk in his shoes’.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          That’s lovely feedback; thanks so much, Jennie. It really helps.

          1. Jennie avatar

            You are welcome, Hugh. Best to you.

  3. seaangel4444 avatar

    Your flash fiction is always riveting, Hugh! I love it! Cher xoxoxo

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Cher, it’s lovely of you to say, thank you. Getting readers to read right to the end can sometimes be challenging.

      1. seaangel4444 avatar

        Your surprises always warrant the ‘stay on the edge of your seat and keep reading on’ mentality, Hugh!

  4. Dan Antion avatar

    I love the way you bring us to a surprise ending. Good job.

  5. Eugi avatar

    Wow! Great build up to a chilling finale, Hugh. Your story kept my attention to the very end. You excel in writing flash fiction, my friend.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s fantastic feedback on my writing and this flash fiction piece. Thank you, Eugi.

      1. Eugi avatar

        You are most welcome, Hugh.

  6. V.M.Sang avatar

    It made me shiver at the end. But you built it up really well, and the ending was a surprise.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you for the great feedback. I’m particularly happy that you enjoyed the buildup in this flash fiction piece.

  7. Esther Chilton avatar

    Wow! I enjoyed the way you take us to the city so we can image ourselves there. You build it up towards the climax really well. We’re not sure what to expect and then you hit us with that ending. Thank you for taking up the challenge. May I use this on my blog on writing prompts day?

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you for the fantastic feedback, Esther. I’m enjoying these writing challenges you’ve given me.
      Yes, please go ahead and use the story in your upcoming post.

      1. Esther Chilton avatar

        Thank you very much, Hugh, and I’m glad you’re enjoying the challenges.

  8. noelleg44 avatar

    Woo, Hugh. The ending took my breath away! I’m reading a sci fi book now that has at its core a mentally deranged woman.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      So pleased that the ending took your breath away, Noelle. That’s wonderful feedback.
      Mental health plays a big part in today’s society. I hope the book you’re reading also takes your breath away.

      1. noelleg44 avatar

        Unfortunately, no. It’s an exercise in verbosity.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Oh, no. Will you leave a review?

      2. noelleg44 avatar

        Yes, and I’ll try to be kind.

  9. Cathy avatar

    Chilling, Hugh. Something like this is all too possible.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      True, Cathy. Mental health is such a big subject now.

  10. Carol anne avatar

    Wonderful piece of flash fiction, Hugh! <3 <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Carol anne. Was there anything you particularly liked? Feedback is so helpful.

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