August 22, 2023, prompt: Write a story about the arrival of the weather in 99 words (no more, no less). It can mean any kind of weather event, meteorological or mythological. Is the weather personified, random, or calculating? Where does it arrive? Is it typical or epoch-changing? Who is involved? See August 22: Story Challenge in 99 words for more details.

The Final Breaths Of Summer – by Hugh W. Roberts

Amidst the flags, my town celebrated love, welcoming the weather’s arrival that marked the final breaths of summer. Hearts bloomed like the June flowers.

Couples, regardless of gender, held hands, their love as natural as the warm sun that had kissed their cheeks.

But, like people, the weather could be erratic.

A sudden storm darkened the sky, raining on the love. But as resilient as a rainbow after the rain, love persisted.

Together, we weather life’s disruptions, proving that love knows no bounds, no matter the storm. It always shines as brilliantly as the sun emerging from the clouds.


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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35 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – The Final Breaths Of Summer”

  1. D. Avery @shiftnshake avatar

    This really explains the rainbow symbol. Beautifully done.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you think so, D. I must look into why the LGBTQI community adopted the rainbow flag.

  2. Michael B. Fishman avatar

    I loved this line: “their love as natural as the warm sun that had kissed their cheeks.”
    I pray that your words in this story one day become the norm and the way everyone lives life.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I do hope so, one day soon, Michael. It’s heartbreaking to think people are horrible to others simply because they are different.

  3. Brenda avatar

    Lovely Hugh. The rainbow after the rain

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Your words remind me of a song, Brenda – Sunshine After the Rain. Now, I’ll be humming it for the rest of the day.

      1. Brenda avatar

        Hehe. Is that a good or bad thing. But I think you’ve returned the favour and it’s in my head too. Nor a bad thing for my lesson planning/focus

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  5. dgkaye avatar

    A beautiful story Hugh :)

      1. Jennie avatar

        You’re welcome.

  6. Eugi avatar

    Beautiful story, Hugh!

      1. Eugi avatar

        My pleasure, Hugh.

  7. willowdot21 avatar

    Wonderful 💜💜

  8. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    A positive outlook on summer’s end, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you think so, Terri. We have a public holiday on Monday in the UK, which officially marks the end of the summer season. It’s the final public holiday before Christmas Day.

      1. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

        Like our Labor day, Hugh, usually the first Monday in September. Our next public holidays are veterans day, then the two Thanksgiving holidays. All three in November.

  9. JT Twissel avatar

    Wonderful! 😊👏👏

  10. simply_mwanza avatar

    Love really is a beautiful thing!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I agree. A world without love is an empty world.

  11. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    What a lovely and sweet story, Hugh. A bit out of character, though. :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Yes, sometimes my mind goes a different route, Liesbet. It all depends on what the prompt for the story is.

  12. Dan Antion avatar

    So nice to end the week with a beautiful thought. Thanks Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      You’re welcome, Dan.

  13. Cathy avatar

    That’s lovely, Hugh.

  14. Michelle (Boomer Eco Crusader) avatar

    Love this Hugh! Beautifully done. 😍🌈🏳️‍🌈❤️

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Michelle. 🌈

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