Flash Fiction Friday – The Final Breaths Of Summer

August 22, 2023, prompt: Write a story about the arrival of the weather in 99 words (no more, no less). It can mean any kind of weather event, meteorological or mythological. Is the weather personified, random, or calculating? Where does it arrive? Is it typical or epoch-changing? Who is involved? See August 22: Story Challenge in 99 words for more details.

The Final Breaths Of Summer – by Hugh W. Roberts

Amidst the flags, my town celebrated love, welcoming the weather’s arrival that marked the final breaths of summer. Hearts bloomed like the June flowers.

Couples, regardless of gender, held hands, their love as natural as the warm sun that had kissed their cheeks.

But, like people, the weather could be erratic.

A sudden storm darkened the sky, raining on the love. But as resilient as a rainbow after the rain, love persisted.

Together, we weather life’s disruptions, proving that love knows no bounds, no matter the storm. It always shines as brilliantly as the sun emerging from the clouds.


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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35 thoughts on “Flash Fiction Friday – The Final Breaths Of Summer

  1. Love can weather many a storm as long as two hand in hand like ying and yang walk it as one. X I loved this.

  2. I loved this line: “their love as natural as the warm sun that had kissed their cheeks.”
    I pray that your words in this story one day become the norm and the way everyone lives life.

      1. Hehe. Is that a good or bad thing. But I think you’ve returned the favour and it’s in my head too. Nor a bad thing for my lesson planning/focus

    1. I’m glad you think so, Terri. We have a public holiday on Monday in the UK, which officially marks the end of the summer season. It’s the final public holiday before Christmas Day.

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