February 6, 2023, prompt: Write a story as a love letter to nature in 99 words (no more, no less). You could reach back to more pastoral times of writing or enter into the future. Who is writing the letter — an ant or an aunt? Is it a lifetime of love or aeons? Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.


Natural Ways – by Hugh W. Roberts

Written in blood, the script of the love letter was unsteady.

Addressed to ‘Nature, my one true love,’ the writer spoke of a deep, abiding affection, a need to be near the earth and its creatures.

As the police read on, chills ran down their spines. The writer spoke of desires to be one with nature, to shed their human skin and live as wild things do. It was clear the author was unstable. The authorities feared the worst.

Searching the woods, they found a campsite, abandoned but for a single, chilling clue: a neatly arranged pile of bones.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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26 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Natural Ways”

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  2. cav12 avatar

    Intriguing ending, Hugh. I was thinking serial killer!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      You’d make a great dective.

      1. cav12 avatar
  3. Norah avatar

    Very chilling. Not sure how he arranged his pile of bones though.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Was it he/she who arranged those bones, though? Were they his/her bones?

      1. Norah avatar

        Good questions, Hugh. You’re the best one to answer though. :)

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          It’s so interesting that you see those bones as the bones of the writer of the letter, Norah. I love how readers interpret these pieces of flash fiction.

          1. Norah avatar

            The responses to the stories are as varied as the story responses are to the prompt. Always amazing.

  4. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    That’s the twisty Hugh I know! You’re a great storyteller but I think your mind is full of kindness.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      People who know me, I hope, will confirm that, Terri. I can’t help but allow my mind to wander down the dark path when writing many of these flash fiction pieces.

  5. JT Twissel avatar

    Well I guess the writer got his wish – to be one with nature!

  6. Dan Antion avatar

    I always enjoy your short fiction, Hugh. It’s hard to tell a story in so few words, yet you always manage. Well done.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks for the great feedback, Dan.

  7. TanGental avatar

    I wonder at all that blood… such a sticky mess. You do have recesses that are deep and chilling

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Yes, I surprise myself sometimes with what comes out of my head and through my fingertips. I had to dig very deep for this story.

  8. Erika avatar

    😱 You have such a way of writing, Hugh!!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks so much, Erika. That’s so lovely of you to say.

      1. Erika avatar

        Simply how I see it 😊

  9. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Chilling, indeed. Still some human capacities left (must have been an organized person), before the human skin was shed and he became one with nature, living and killing like animals do. Good one, Hugh!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Glad you enjoyed it, Liesbet. I’m pleased the chilling element came through. I found it rather tough to write because I went deeper into my mind. It does worry me, sometimes.

  10. Brenda avatar

    Loved this Hugh … it’ll keep the police perplexed for a while

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Brenda. If Mother Nature has her way, it’ll remain a case unsolved. Forensics may have other ideas.

  11. Paul Ariss avatar
    Paul Ariss

    So who arranged the bones….? So many questions.

    Intriguing Mr Roberts!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. I’m thinking Mother Nature arranged those bones, Paul.

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