October 17, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that references “I see the light in you.” You can use the phrase or demonstrate it in a story. Who is shining and why? Who is observing or reacting? What is the setting? Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.


The Hunger Game – by Hugh W. Roberts

It was the light in her eyes that lit up my life.

As she gently dragged her long fingernail over my adam’s apple to the hair on my chest, the hairs on the back of my neck stood up. I’d undone the buttons for temptation, and it worked.

I wasn’t shocked when she hissed, as the light in her, fed our desires. I gasped when she revealed two fanged teeth behind the bright red lips of her closed mouth, even though I knew what to expect.

She never saw the wooden stake I was holding.

Now I could feast.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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40 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – The Hunger Game”

  1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

    I knew you would do a scary one, Hugh. Well done!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Colleen.
      Happy Halloween.

      1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

        Happy Halloween, Hugh. Did you guys carve pumpkins this year?

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Our pumpkin growing was a disaster this year, Colleen. None of the flowers turned to fruit. It’s the first year we’ve not had any pumpkins to carve.

          1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

            Oh, darn. That’s a shame. I didn’t see a lot of bees this year, either. It was just too hot. Let’s hope next year is better. 🎃

            1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

              We had a lot of bees this year, and for the first time in quite a few years, we saw lots more butterflies as well. It may well have been the heat, although the heatwaves we experienced only lasted a few days in Swansea.

            2. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

              I hope the weather changes for the better for many in the world. The natural disasters seem to be getting worse… climate change for sure.

  2. D. Avery @shiftnshake avatar

    I never know what to expect except the unexpected!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      And I hope you got it. Thanks, D.

  3. Brenda avatar

    Great little story Hugh

  4. JT Twissel avatar

    The tables are turned!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      And it only takes a split second.

  5. orthodoxmom3 avatar

    Great twist! Well done!

  6. Eugenia avatar

    Whoa! A nice twist!

      1. Eugenia avatar

        You’re welcome, Hugh.

  7. Norah avatar

    Well done, Hugh. A surprise and a chuckle, as usual.

  8. Erika avatar

    So quickly the tide turns 😅

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Yes, exactly. It only takes a second, Erika.

  9. Cathy avatar

    Nice twist, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar
  10. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    A little vampire with my morning coffee, Hugh, very well done! The Hunger Games with the “s” is really an excellent series if you ever get the itch. The movie of the first book of the same name follows the book very closely if you want to stream it. Happy Friday!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you for the recommendation, Terri. Next time I see the movie advertised, I’ll take a look.
      Have a great weekend.

  11. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Horror first thing in the morning… Hmmm. When I saw your title, I thought, “What a coincidence, I just watched one of The Hungrer Games movies last night.” But this kind of hunger was a bit different.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      The spelling and grammar software I use kept telling me to add an ‘S’ to Game, Liesbet. I’ve never seen the movies, but I know of them.
      Glad both are different.

      1. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

        I recommend watching the movies, Hugh. They are quite good. And we are picky when it comes to movies. Of course, everyone’s taste is different.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Thank you for the recommendation, Liesbet. I’ve seen the movies advertised on TV, but I never got around to watching them for whatever reason. Next time they’re on, I’ll take a look.

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