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Flash Fiction Friday – Secret Of The Stones

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Hugh W. Roberts

Jun 10, 2022

June 6, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that features stone-stacking. How does the activity fit into a story? Who is involved? What is the tone? Do the stones have special meaning? Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.

Secret Of The Stones – by Hugh W. Roberts

“These stacked stones are where I buried Fluffy.

When I cried, Fluffy comforted me.

When I had nobody to talk to, Fluffy would always listen.

He was a big part of my life, but he shouldn’t have told me to keep our secret.

Things got a bit out of hand when I told my teacher, Mrs Price, the secret.

Fluffy got angry, so I had to kill him.

Now I come to the stacked stones and talk to him every day.

It’s a good job. Fluffy is only an imaginary friend; otherwise, we’d both be in lots of trouble.”

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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43 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Secret Of The Stones”

Norah

Jun 13, 2022

That’s so funny, Hugh. I laughed out loud at your suprise ending. I was trying to predict, but definitely didn’t go there. 😂

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 13, 2022
  
  Thanks, Norah. It’s interesting to hear the different takes on this flash fiction piece. While writing it, it wanted to go off in several different directions.
  
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  1. Norah
    
    Jun 14, 2022
    
    Writing the different endings could make an interesting compilation.
    
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2. Anonymous
  
  Jul 8, 2022
  
  Well done, Hugh!
  
  This is brilliant!
  
  You have the most incredible and uncanny way of saying so much in these 99 words. Talk about a string of opposite emotions within the turn of a few words! Stellar, dear Hugh!
  
  Cher xoxoxo
  
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  1. Hugh W. Roberts
    
    Jul 9, 2022
    
    Thank you, Cher. And what lovely feedback on my 99-word stories. The more I do them, the better I get (I think).
    
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D. Wallace Peach

Jun 12, 2022

Time for the looney bin, Hugh. Ha ha. So twisted! Hard to tell what’s real and what’s imaginary.

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 13, 2022
  
  I’m so pleased that’s how you saw the story, Diana. What’s real and imaginary is what I had in mind when I wrote it. And twisted? Absolutely.
  
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  1. D. Wallace Peach
    
    Jun 13, 2022
    
    Always a delight to read your flash pieces, Hugh. :-)
    
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JT Twissel

Jun 11, 2022

I wonder if your imaginary friend will come back to haunt you for killing him!

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 12, 2022
  
  I never had an imaginary friend, but the real storyteller certainly did.
  
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Robert J Jr.

Jun 11, 2022

Cool story.

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 12, 2022
  
  Thanks!
  
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Will

Jun 11, 2022

Your story reminds me and inspires….

As the oldest child, I spent several years alone before my sister was able to do anything more than drool. During this time my friend Franklin kept me company. Franklin was rather tall. He would sit comfortably in the reclining chair in our living room, but his legs stuck out rather far. I warned my mother not to sit on Franklin but I said nothing of his legs. When she tripped over them she yelled that Franklin must go! That’s when Franklin got up and walked out. I never saw my imaginary friend again.

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 12, 2022
  
  That’s a great piece of flash fiction based on a true story, Will. I’m glad my piece of flash inspired you to share it. That’s a wicked twist at the end.
  
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Will

Jun 11, 2022

btw, I’m reading your tags to make mine better. Hope you don’t mind.

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 12, 2022
  
  Not at all, Will. I’m always happy to help.
  
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Will

Jun 11, 2022

Just bought Glimpses. Looking forward to a collection of your stories!!

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 12, 2022
  
  Will, thank you so much for buying my first book of a collection of flash fiction and short stories. I hope you enjoy it, especially the story about the group of bloggers who discover a killer app. Happy reading.
  
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Janis @ RetirementallyChallenged.com

Jun 11, 2022

Fun twist… I hope you don’t end up in imaginary prison for a fake murder :)

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 11, 2022
  
  Imaginary prisons can be awful places.
  
  Flash Fiction Friday – The Prison Cell
  
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Judith Barrow

Jun 10, 2022

Really must try this exercise,Hugh.Unfortunately this story brought back a memory,both sad and silly,in equal measures. I had a rabbit who died when I was ten.My father said it was because I’d given her wet dandelion leaves.Unbelievably, I believed him, and felt guilty for years – until David, husband ,pointed out the obvious…wild rabbits eat wet dandelion leaves….

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 11, 2022
  
  What a horrible thing your father told you, Judith. I had a pet rabbit too, but I can’t remember what happened to it. My biggest claim to fame, though, is a goldfish called Syliva. I had her for 26 years. It was like the end of the world for me when she passed away.
  
  The 99-word flash fiction challenge at the Carrot Ranch is something I enjoy a lot. It’s my favourite writing challenge. Because you only have 99 words to tell a story, it makes you think about all the words you’re using. I hope you’ll be able to join sometime. There is a lovely bunch of writers who participate every week.
  
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Terri Webster Schrandt

Jun 10, 2022

I suppose dead imaginary friends should have a stone memorial, Hugh! I thought Fluffy was a furbaby of some kind. Fun read with your usual twist!

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 11, 2022
  
  It’s interesting hearing what readers think Fluffy is, Terri and what they feel about the story as a whole.
  
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Liesbet @ Roaming About

Jun 10, 2022

I really like this one, Hugh. Truly a nice twist, as I thought you were on the murder path again. :) You must be getting good at keeping it at 99 words with all this practice. Is it getting easier? Do you have a good feel of how long the flash fiction stories can/should be?

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 10, 2022
  
  Thanks, Liesbet.
  
  The 99-word flash fiction challenge has become my favourite writing challenge. Flash fiction has grown on me, although I wouldn’t say it has gotten easier to write. But it is something I always enjoy writing. Sometimes, I’m at a loss for what to write. It all depends on the prompt.
  
  From what I have been told, flash fiction can be a story of up to 1,000 words. However, I have also heard some people say anything up to 2,500 words. It depends on who is telling you. I think once a piece of fiction exceeds 1,000 words, it becomes a short story.
  
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willowdot21

Jun 10, 2022

I love this Hugh…. Though sometimes I worry about you 😜😜😜

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 10, 2022
  
  Glad you liked it, Willow. The dark side of my creative mind won again.
  
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  1. willowdot21
    
    Jun 10, 2022
    
    Lol it often does God loves you💜💜💜
    
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2. Gary A Wilson
  
  Jun 11, 2022
  
  LOLOLOLOL . . . .
  
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noelleg44

Jun 10, 2022

Good grief, Hugh, I was thinking Fluffy was a cat!

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 10, 2022
  
  I’m glad you thought fluffy was an animal, Noelle. I wonder how many people have the nickname Fluffy?
  
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Erika

Jun 10, 2022

Let’s hope he was an imaginary friend 😱

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 10, 2022
  
  Exactly, Erika. And if Fluffy was not imaginary, I wonder what secret he had with the storyteller?
  
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  1. Erika
    
    Jun 10, 2022
    
    Which way ever, there would be “corpses in the cellar.”
    
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Sadje

Jun 10, 2022

Such a sweet story.

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1. Hugh W. Roberts
  
  Jun 10, 2022
  
  That’s interesting how you say you found this story sweet. I’m interested to see what other readers say.
  
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