February 7, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes anxiety. Who has anxiety or what is the source? Is there conflict? How can you use anxiety to further a story? Go where the prompt leads!


First Night Nerves – by Hugh W. Roberts

The thought of the upcoming honeymoon caused Arnold nothing but anxiety.

What if he couldn’t perform? What if Enid, his soon-to-be new wife, demanded more? Not even the thought of Enid’s lovely, long legs helped with his anxiety.

But Arnold needn’t have ever been anxious. On the night of their wedding, Enid made him feel relaxed and comfortable. By the time the performance was over, Arnold’s anxiety had disappeared. But three minutes later, Arnold was dead.

As Enid cocooned Arnold’s hairy body, she thought about her next husband. How lucky she was to be a female, black widow spider.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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51 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – First Night Nerves”

  1. Michael B. Fishman avatar

    So much for being attracted to a pair of long legs. This was a fun story with an enjoyable twist!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Michael. And there were 4 pairs of long legs to admire.

  2. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist avatar

    Wonderful. Enjoyed the humour and the laugh you gave me.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good to hear, Irene. Thanks so much for reading my little piece of dark humour.

  3. Sam "Goldie" Kirk avatar

    This was a treat! All of a sudden, the ‘long legs’ take on a whole new meaning.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Sam. And he had eight to concentrate on.

  4. Gloria avatar

    My favourite from the collection Hugh. You bring out the darkness in me! Hahaha!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s so kind to pick my piece of flash as your favourite. Thanks so much, Gloria.

  5. D. Avery @shiftnshake avatar

    A twisted web you wove… or did you lead straight to the twist? Another fun flash either way.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. This webbed piece of flash seems to have gone down well. Just like Arnold did, I guess.

  6. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

    Oh, very spooky, indeed, Hugh! What a great twist! <3

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Colleen. I feel sorry for the males of that species.

      1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

        LOL! They sure get a bad rap, don’t they? LOL! <3

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