November 25, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write about a cancelled flight. Where was the flight headed? Who does it impact, and why? How does a protagonist handle the situation? Go where the prompt leads!


Ready For Take-off? – by Hugh W. Roberts

“Are you kidding? Why’s the flight cancelled again? We’re all desperate to get out of here.”

“I don’t know, Dave. Something about the pilot having a headache.”

“A headache? That’s no excuse. Doesn’t the pilot know we’ve all got a job to do? Not another 24-hours stuck in this crowded place with you lot.”

“Maybe the flight will take off tomorrow when the pilot is feeling better?”

“I hope so. We’ve all got long journeys ahead of us.”

Two days later, Dave’s flight took off. He made it to the egg first. Nine months later, baby Dave was born.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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48 responses to “Ready For Take-off?”

  1. Canceled Flight « Carrot Ranch Literary Community avatar

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  2. Charli Mills avatar

    The pilot had a headache! You are the master of twists.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. That was the main hint of what the twist was, Charli. And glad to see nobody has yet guessed what it was.

  3. TanGental avatar

    beautifully smutty with hints of Woody Allen’s All You Ever Wanted To Know About Sex But Were Afraid To Ask. Loved it

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Geoff. Glad you enjoyed it. I sometimes surprise myself with what I come up with.

      1. TanGental avatar

        You have a career in screen writing in that narrow but notoriously perky genre of Mumbles porn

  4. seaangel4444 avatar

    LOL Brilliant, dear Hugh! I am literally grinning from ear to ear! Cher xoxoxo

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s great to hear, Cher. We all need some laughter right now.

      1. seaangel4444 avatar

        We sure do, don’t we? Thank you, Hugh! 🤗🤗💜💜

  5. Norah avatar

    Well that’s original, and very funny. It made me laugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good to hear, thanks, Norah.

  6. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Haha, Hugh! Thank you for the smile on this otherwise very stressful and frustrating day! A great way to end my day. :-)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Sorry to hear you’ve had a stressful and frustrating day, Liesbet. I’m glad my little story has made you smile on such a day.

  7. Infinite Living avatar

    Hahaha this is so hilarious!! I had to read it twice, and then the headache made sense to me! :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I was hoping the ‘headache’ bit would tell readers where exactly the setting of this piece of flash was. So far, so good.

  8. Rebecca Glaessner Author avatar

    How fun Hugh! What a fabulous take on the prompt. I love it.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you think so. Thanks, Rebecca.

  9. Sarah Angleton avatar

    Allegedly flights are actually good for headaches.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Are they? I’ll have to take your word for it, Sarah.

  10. Dan Antion avatar

    That was a delightful twist. Nicely fine, Hugh.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Dan. Glad you enjoyed it.

  11. apeacefultree avatar

    This gives new meaning to “child prodigy” :).. fun read, thank you!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

  12. Liz H avatar

    Took me a minute, but yeah, ya got me, Hugh!
    Too funny!!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s good to hear, Liz. So far, nobody guessed the twist before reaching the end.

      1. Liz H avatar

        Nice work, Hugh. Timing is everything!

    2. Chel Owens avatar

      🤦‍♀️ I was going for literal at first, and it’s not even Easter.

      1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

        No, but it won’t be long before we start seeing Easter eggs on the shelves here in the UK. Usually, the day after Boxing Day.

  13. Cathy avatar

    You got me too 😁

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Excellent. Another one in the back of the net, Cathy. Thank you.

  14. Judith Barrow avatar

    Hahaha – wonderful Hugh!!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Judith. Glad it made you laugh.

  15. Suzanne@PictureRetirement avatar

    So here I am thinking ‘headache’, Hugh couldn’t come up with anything better than that for a cancelled flight? Got me!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good to hear, Suzanne. I always enjoy it when readers don’t see the twist coming.

  16. willowdot21 avatar

    You caught me there Hugh I had to read it twice!! 💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Glad you enjoyed it, Willow. You must have done with reading it twice.

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        I did Hugh 💜😂

  17. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    And here we are thinking of the traditional airline flight, Hugh! Well done!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Hehe! So I got you all again? I like it when that happens, Terri.

  18. Darlene avatar

    Excellent! Still laughing.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good to hear. I enjoy making people laugh. Keep on laughing, Darlene.

  19. Aimer Boyz avatar
    Aimer Boyz

    LOL! Hysterical. Love it. :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Aimer. I thought a little humour was in the making when I saw the prompt, and my mind led me to…well, you know where.

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