September 17, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story of mice. It can feature any variety of the little critters in any situation. Are they the character or the inciting incident? Use any genre, including BOTS (based on a true story). Go where the prompt leads!


Musophobia – by Hugh W. Roberts

They weren’t alive, but how had they got here?

Suffering from musophobia, Barbara made a quick exit from the beach that was full of mice.

Turning on the radio when she got home, she waited patiently for the early morning news.

“Reports are coming in of a ship having hit rocks off the coast of North Cornwall during last nights storms. Hundreds of freight boxes containing computer mice have broken up and ended up on the beaches along the coastline…”

Just the sight, thought, or the mere mention of the word ‘mice’ was as much as Barbara could take.


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch. Click here to join in.

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36 responses to “Musophobia #flashfiction”

  1. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) avatar

    Love how you’ve built in the two previous prompts too.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Having only just returned the Ranch, I remember last week’s prompt, but can’t remember the previous weeks.
      Thanks, Anne.

      1. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) avatar

        Must have filtered through unconsciously. Good to see you back here.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar
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  3. dgkaye avatar

    Well done and too cute! :) x

  4. Charli Mills avatar

    Ha, ha! What a great twist Hugh! And yes, I can comiserate that even the suggestion of a mouse of triggering enough.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I very much thought out of the box with this one, Charli. At first, I was stuck. Then I saw the computer mouse on my desk and thought ‘now there’s an idea.’

  5. JT Twissel avatar

    Always with the nifty twist!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you. One day, I will fool you all and not add a twist.

  6. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Hahaha, Hugh, a good one! Very clever!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thank you, Terri. This is one of my favourites.

  7. Debbie avatar

    Great twist Hugh, I love your creativity!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Debbie. Mice are mice, after all, aren’t they?

  8. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    Brilliant. Didn’t see that coming. Again. :-)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Good to hear. My thoughts were ‘out of the box’ for this one.

  9. Erika avatar

    Hehe, too funny!

      1. Erika avatar

        You are welcome, Hugh!!

  10. Chel Owens avatar

    Good thing she ran before getting run over by bus lines…

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Or find any chips or spam on that beach…

      1. Chel Owens avatar

        I forgot about Spam.

        1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

          Just as well to forget about spam. Lucily, it usually ends up in the right place anyway.

  11. Scribblans avatar

    ‘Tis dangerous on that there North Cornwall coast… mind you, a spilled cargo bounty wouldn’t last long, plenty of old caves and hidey holes (suitable for large mice or large amounts of mice) from the old smuggling days.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I bet there’s still a lot of hidden treasure in those caves.

      1. Scribblans avatar

        *Taps nose and winks*
        Couldn’t say m’boy…

  12. Aimer Boyz avatar
    Aimer Boyz

    Great picture, makes mice look cute, but…Ugh! I’d have been off that beach so fast :)

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      With musophobia, I’m not surprised. For me, it’s snakes. Ugh! I can’t even eat the jelly ones sold as candy.

      1. Aimer Boyz avatar
        Aimer Boyz

        Yep, snakes too. Nightmare inducing!

  13. The Story Reading Ape avatar

    LOL – Nice one, Hugh 👍😂

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Thanks, Chris. I went a ‘bit out of the box’ for this one.

  14. Robert avatar

    Computer mice! Nice twist!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

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