While trudging through the thick snow with her team, Judy Morrison’s mind was in overdrive. For years, she’d been trying to solve the puzzle of the thirteenth day of Christmas, something mankind had mistakenly taken for granted, and was now almost on the verge of solving the riddle.

Everybody thought that Christmas had twelve days, yet why did the twelfth night of Christmas fall on the thirteenth day?

Jonathan, Judy’s boyfriend, had given her twelve gifts: one on each day of the twelve days of Christmas. On the night he gave her gift number eleven, the night of January 4th, Judy had visions that the team were being watched by a mysterious force. As the clock struck midnight, and the twelfth day of Christmas arrived, Judy woke screaming from a terrible nightmare.  

“What’s wrong,” asked Jonathan, rubbing his eyes, as the cold winds battered their tent.

“We’re all going to die on the sixth day of January,” cried Judy.

“What? Don’t be silly. Go back to sleep. It was just a nightmare.”

Several minutes later, Judy found herself counting backwards to December 25th, the first day of Christmas. It still didn’t add up why ‘Twelfth Night’ was on the night of the 6th of January, still over a day away.

The following evening, Jonathan gave Judy the last of his gifts, an engagement ring. Tomorrow, they would celebrate with the rest of their group when they arrived at their final destination, the mysterious village of ‘Twelfth Night,’ alleged to only appeared on January 6th.

As they waited patiently for ‘Twelfth Night’ to appear, Judy Morrison finally solved the riddle. As she turned to Jonathan to reveal the secret of Twelfth Night, the hand of a mysterious force that had been watching them since the first day of Christmas, froze the group in time.

Its secret was safe again from mankind, a species which, one day, it would conquer.

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Written in response to the Monthly Speculative Fiction Writing Prompt, from Diana, at Myths of the Mirror. Click here for full details.

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  2. D. Parker avatar

    Dropped by from #BloggersPitStop today but always, always gald to be here, Hugh, cool short – shared! :)
    Hope the week ahead treats you kindly. :)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thank you, Donna. I appreciate you sharing the shorty too.
      Have a great week.

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  4. Lee MacArthur avatar

    What a fun little story. Its the perfect beginning of a longer story as it really hooks the reader. Thank you for sharing.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thank you for reading it. Hooking the reader at the beginning can be a difficult task, so I’m glad this short story hooked you straight away.

  5. Stevie Turner avatar

    Great picture and ending, Hugh. Thanks for sharing.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      You’re welcome, Stevie.

  6. ellenbest24 avatar

    Hugh you spooking us? A great write and response to a beautiful picture.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thanks, Ellen. You know how much I like to ‘spook’ readers.

      1. ellenbest24 avatar

        I may have caught that trait from a writer I once met … oh that will be you Hugh 😃🤣

        1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

          It was an honour to meet you, too. I hope our paths cross again.

          1. ellenbest24 avatar

            I am hoping to be at the bash this year (fingers crossed).

            1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

              Wonderful. It’ll be great to see you there and to have a chance for a catch-up, Ellen.

            2. ellenbest24 avatar

              I hope so.too.

  7. jjspina avatar

    Clever story, Hugh. You always know how to hook your readers at the end. Now we will wonder forever about the 13th night. LOL! You are in your element, my friend! 😘🤗

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thank you, Janice. I had great fun writing this short story, but the ending took over three weeks to come to me.

  8. Violet Lentz avatar

    Clever premise. I enjoyed the read and look forward to your entry in February on this challenge. nice dropping in here..

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thank you, Violet. I’m looking forward to seeing the prompt for this month’s challenge. I just need to remember to get my entry in before the deadline.

  9. Robert Matthew Goldstein avatar
    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thanks, Rob. It took me three weeks to come up with that ending.

  10. George avatar

    Love the story, Hugh, though that photo is too much of a reminder of what’s outside these days..:)

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      So I hear, George. Stay safe and warm, and thanks for reading my riddle of Twelfth Night.

  11. Teagan R. Geneviene avatar

    LOL… Hugh… (shakes head) Well done. You are in great “Hugh-vian” form. There. Now you have entered into the ranks of Teaganism words! ;)
    Hugs on the wing.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Oh, I like that very much – ‘Teaganism’ words. I guess it’s our calling card, Teagan.
      Thanks so much for reading my riddle of Twelfth Night.
      Hugs.

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  13. Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections avatar

    I always thought that Christmas didn’t count as the first day, so counting the 12 days starts on December 26. But your intriguing story stirs up lots of mystery around the 13th night. Please, don’t freeze us in time! I’m encouraged that January is nearly over! Though plunging in the deep freeze for the next few days is not reassuring……

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      That could be the reason, Molly, but isn’t the first day of Christmas the 25th Dec? If they call it Christmas Day, then it has to the first day, doesn’t it? Now you got me wondering if we’re celebrating Christmas on the wrong day. Should we be celebrating on the 26th? But that would then mean we’d have to wait a whole day before emptying our stockings and opening the gifts under the tree. Thank goodness it’s only another 48 weeks away. Plenty of time to solve the riddle.
      Stay warm.

      1. Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections avatar

        Maybe we could get a government grant to do a study of this Christmas date dilemma. Actually I’d like to propose legislation that we change Christmas to the 4th Monday in December and do away with any worries of what that date is. That way workers always get a 3 day weekend. And the 12th night would be totally in chaos. Scary thought, right??

        1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

          Well, if Easter can move dates, I can’t see any reason why Christmas can’t? If the Easter Bunny always gets the delivery date right, then so can Santa, yes?

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