Visitors #flashfiction

“We’re safe here in the forest until Marlon gets back. All of you, continue to rest and gain energy from bathing in the dappled light of the forest. Hopefully, we have found our new home.”

For 27 days and nights, they waited for Marlon to return. There was an anticipation of excitement in the air when he came back.

“Marlon, what have you found out? Can we live here?”

“I’m afraid not, your majesty.”

“What? Why not?”

“It’s some of the lifeforms of this world, Sir. They cut down the trees. Soon, nothing of this world will be left.”

Written in response to Charli Mill’s 99-word flash fiction challenge, with the theme of ‘Forest Bathing‘, over at the Carrot Ranch.

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34 responses to “Visitors #flashfiction”

  1. anuragbakhshi avatar

    Yeah, we don’t deserve this planet.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I agree. When we’re all gone, I hope another lifeform will take more care of it.

  2. Anne Copeland avatar
    Anne Copeland

    You are so truly amazing. I LOVE your writing. It is definitely art in its highest form.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Wow! What a fabulous compliment, Anne. That’s certainly made my day. Thank you so much.

  3. robbiesinspiration avatar

    Great, Hugh. You have hit the nail on the head with this one.

  4. jjspina avatar

    Clever one, Hugh! It is sad that our forests are getting decimated. If it continues we will be in trouble. We need the trees to clean our air and provide oxygen as you mentioned. Hugs xx

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      We do, Janice. Trees are our friends. We should treat them like our weekend guests.
      xx

      1. jjspina avatar
  5. Charli Mills avatar

    A good bit of reverse plotting in a sci-fi where we humans are the destroying monsters making our own world unihabitable to others. Thankfully, this monarch didnt land in the US and make the classic demand ;; “Take me to your leader!”

  6. dgkaye avatar

    Powerful little piece here Hugh. <3

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thanks, Debby. Another one for book 2, maybe?
      xx

      1. dgkaye avatar

        I’m thinking so! :) xx

  7. D. Wallace Peach avatar

    Good one, Hugh. Hopefully they didn’t land on Earth! Or we’re all doomed.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Pause for thought, Diana. I think we may well already be. 🤔

      1. D. Wallace Peach avatar

        Not yet, but we’re getting there fast! It’s mind-boggling that people think they can survive without nature.

  8. Liesbet @ Roaming About avatar

    For some reason I think this could be non-fiction…

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      A true story, maybe? 😀 Who knows?

  9. JT Twissel avatar

    I love forests so this story is a sad one for me – but appropriate for the upcoming Earth Day! Well done.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      I wasn’t aware that Earth Day was coming up. Thanks for letting me know, Jan.

  10. Retirement Reflections avatar
    Retirement Reflections

    Sadly true.
    I love your ability to be so thought-provoking in just a few words.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thank you, Donna. I like my stories to have an inner message that everyone can think about.

  11. WaltPage avatar

    Great story Hugh ☺

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      Thanks, Walt.
      Have a great weekend.

      1. WaltPage avatar
  12. Teagan R. Geneviene avatar

    Well done, Hugh. TGIF hugs.

      1. Teagan R. Geneviene avatar

        My inner Druid was speechless. More hugs.

  13. Norah avatar

    So true, Hugh, and too sad. We need to stop those lifeforms before they get out of control.

    1. Hugh's Views and News avatar

      We do, Norah. It’s a frightening thought of how much destruction us humans can do on our own. And, of course, our friends the trees, take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen.

      1. Norah avatar

        That’s right. We shouldn’t be destroying our friends so wantonly.

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