Tales From Under The Rainbow (Part 1) #AmWriting

Written 8 years ago, Tales From Under The Rainbow is my first and only attempt at writing a novel.

It’s sat, untouched, in the archives for far too long.

These are the first 539 words from the book.

I’d appreciate it very much if you would consider leaving me some feedback on what you think about the opening to ‘Tales From Under The Rainbow.