January 16, 2023, prompt: Write a story about a lady shadow in 99 words (no more, no less). Who is this person, and why do they lurk in the shadows. What is the tone and setting for your story? Go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.

Shadow Talk – by Hugh W. Roberts

I followed the lady’s shadow on her journey. She took me around the house and waited for me when I fell behind.

If rooms were dark, I’d flick on the light to see her. She talked to me on our journey and reassured me that everything would be okay.

When I heard the key in the front door, she had to leave, but another shadow took her place.

As I quickly took off my mother’s dress, pearl necklace and high-heeled shoes, my father’s voice called out.

“Are you ready, William? Time for you to hit the under-elevens football pitch.”


Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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27 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – Shadow Talk”

  1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

    Hugh, this was fabulous! Bravo to the shadow woman! 💜

  2. arza avatar

    I was wondering why people take a photo of their own shadow

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Now we know because they can talk to you and answer any questions.

  3. Pepper avatar

    So sweet. Enjoyed all 99 words. 😊

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s great to hear. Thank you.

  4. willowdot21 avatar

    A very poignant ending, no less than I have come to expect from you Hugh 💜💜

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That’s so kind. Thanks so much, Willow.

      1. willowdot21 avatar

        Always a pleasure Hugh

  5. TanGental avatar

    Very well done on 99 words and rather poignant

  6. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Aww, a sweet story and true for many. I know…

  7. JT Twissel avatar

    Wow- that was close!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Very. Have to be careful not to get caught.

  8. Robert J Jr. avatar

    Hugh, I like this one!

  9. Brenda avatar

    Brilliant Hugh. Those shadows have real power

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      They do, Brenda. Much more than we know.

  10. Judith Barrow avatar

    Oh, Hugh, I loved this. x

  11. Dan Antion avatar

    Well done, Hugh!

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