November 7, 2022, prompt: Write a story that includes something squeaky in 99 words (no more, no less). What is squeaky and why? How does it move the story or disrupt a character? Listen, write, and go where the prompt leads! Click here for details.


The Squeaky Husband – by Hugh W. Roberts

“Can you hear that squeaking sound?” Gemma asked her husband.

Peeking over his newspaper at his wife, Malcolm shook his head.

“You must be able to hear it! It’s coming from your direction.”

“I don’t hear anything, darling,” came the reply.

It wasn’t until Malcolm’s death that the squeaking stopped. But as his body began its journey into the ground, Gemma was convinced the squeaking was back.

“Where’s that squeaking noise coming from?” she asked the other mourners.

But nobody could help Gemma because only she could hear the squeaking because only Gemma knew where she was burying Malcolm.

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Written for the 99-word flash fiction challenge hosted by Charli Mills at the Carrot Ranch.

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24 responses to “Flash Fiction Friday – The Squeaky Husband”

  1. robertawrites235681907 avatar

    A nice twist at the end, Hugh.

  2. D. Avery @shiftnshake avatar

    Did the squeaky husband get greaased?

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Given that Gemma thinks she can still hear a squeak, I don’t think so.

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  5. Linda Schaub avatar

    I always smile at these because I never know what to suspect.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      That is exactly what I like to hear from my readers, Linda. Thank you.

      1. Linda Schaub avatar

        You’re welcome Hugh.

  6. JT Twissel avatar

    Shades of the Tell Tale Heart!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      Somebody else mentioned it. I had to look it up, but now I know what you mean. Thank you.

  7. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

    Nice and spooky, Hugh! It’s like Poe with Tell Tale Heart!

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I had to look up Poe and Tell Tale Heart, Colleen. But I see what you mean.

      1. Colleen M. Chesebro avatar

        Yes. You did a great job.

  8. Erika avatar

    Oh, too bad. I guess that wasn’t the solution to stop the squeaking sound.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      No, it wasn’t. But I do wonder if the squeaking sound is there at all?

      1. Erika avatar

        It is… at least for her…

  9. Terri Webster Schrandt avatar

    Squeaky is as squeaky does, nicely done, Hugh! Reminds me of an I Love Lucy episode where each of their quirks got on each other’s nerves 😁 Your story is more sinister, of course.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      I’m glad you saw the sinister side to this piece of flash, Terri. Having an edge to these pieces of fiction is something I usually aim for, although not all of the time.

  10. kindfeelings avatar

    Not even death can separate them.

    1. Hugh W. Roberts avatar

      The squeak and Gemma will always live together, even when she starts her next journey from the world where she currently lives.

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